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It’s said, that all things come to an end
I didn’t believe this was true
Until something changed in you
I saw it in your eyes
Something in me died
The day you said,
"I’m sorry,
I love
Him!"
About the Creator
Gerald Holmes
Born on the east coast of Canada. Travelled the world for my job and discovered that kindness is the most attractive feature in any human.
R.I.P. Tom Brad. Please click here to be moved by his stories.


Comments (12)
Ouch. That stings.
Oh no 😔 Not autobiographical I hope!
A highly emotional piece! Well done, Gerald. I'm going to have to catch up on your work!
I felt the emotion immediately then the sadness the final lines brought Excellent
Oh, no. This is so painful, and well executed. Good luck in the challenge!
Soul crushing, you packed a great punch in these nine lines!! Great work Gerald!!
Those are truly heartbreaking words to hear. Loved your poem!
Heartbreak.
This hits hard, Gerald...Great job!
Damn. This is excellent. Well done, Bro.
ouch
Wow, Gerald! Yours is the first I've read since finding out about the challenge and your talent shows here buddy. Solid!