Every morning as I wake and feel you by my side
Comfort comes with every breath and worries leave my mind
Loving me is the gift you give that makes me who I am
Inspiring me to do all I can to be a better man
Proving soul mates do exist, you fit just like a glove
Sheltering me, saving me
Eclipsing my broken heart, by gifting me your love!!
About the Creator
Gerald Holmes
Born on the east coast of Canada. Travelled the world for my job and discovered that kindness is the most attractive feature in any human.
R.I.P. Tom Brad. Please click here to be moved by his stories.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (6)
BEAUTIFUL
Beautiful take on the challenge.
Just coming back to comment on this now, and read it again. So incredibly beautiful and moving. Bravo!
Awww, this was so sweet and lovely! Such a wonderful Acrostic!
You took the challenge and made a beautiful emotional piece, wonderful
Holey my, Bro. This is wonderful.