The Devil And A Cigarette
On To The Next Fix
I was pack of cigarettes
you, onto your next pack
A chain smoker who had lost his taste
for the one he used to have
We lasted bout' as long
as nicotine - held to its vapor
The only proof we ever were
the stale smell left in the air
No second glance was needed
like you didn’t have a care
You grabbed a glass of whiskey
and I walked away from there
*
Years later, I still wonder,
why I even caught your eye
We were as different as they came
a shooting star and blackest night
But I guess that’s how it goes
you’ve got to try before you win
A little bit of goodness
A little bit of sin
*
I’m not sorry that you hurt me
The pain has made me who I am
Cliché -I know, but honestly,
I don’t really give a damn
I may never trust again
That is, except my intuition
I may have been a fool before
But I’ve had my share of lessons
I finally feel better
got that devil off my back
Survival is a fickle thing
shows you every single thing you lack
If I EVER get the notion, to call and say
what's sup'
I pull that pack out of my bag
think twice
and then, light up
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (7)
Beautiful poem. There is so much truth to these sentiments. I loved the line, "I may never trust again That is, except my intuition" Absolutely stunning and perfectly poignant.❤️
Impressive!!! Left some love!!!💕💖
Amazing poem! Love it
Wow, I love this! Awesome work :)
This is fabulous. Well done, my friend.
A brilliant take on the situation
Yep you slammed it 😀