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The Crypt

For Poppy's Promps #3

By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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Introduction

This is for Poppy's Prompts #3 which you can read about here. I really didn't think I was going to write much today, but this is a good way to kick things off.

It is a villanelle and will contain the following words

  1. Hail
  2. Mould
  3. Vanilla
  4. Compass
  5. Spiderweb

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The music is "Storm The Gates of Heaven" by Wayne County and the Electric Chairs, I know Dharrsheena will love the introduction to this song.

The Crypt

🦇👻☠️⚰️☠️🕸️🕷️

This Is The Place Where The Dead Pass

A Dark Spiderweb Festooned Crypt

Hail The Keeper Of Hell's Compass

☠️⚰️☠️

Vanilla Candles Burned In Glass

Absolve The Odour That Afflicts

This Is The Place Where The Dead Pass

☠️⚰️☠️

Mould On Bodies, Flesh Cannot Last

From This Plane, Their Life Has Now Slipped

Hail The Keeper Of Hell's Compass

☠️⚰️☠️

Prepare For Feast, Maggots And Rats

Spiders Descend As Bodies Stripped

This Is The Place Where The Dead Pass

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Final Place Is Here For Those Passed

To Dark Oblivion They Slipped

Hail The Keeper Of Hell's Compass

☠️⚰️☠️

Nevermore The Ravens Do Rasp

No Return For Those In This Script

This Is The Place Where The Dead Pass

Hail The Keeper Of Hell's Compass

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  • Chloe Gilholy2 years ago

    Very dark and eery captures the Halloween spirit.

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    Ooh you really captured that dark eery feel, it seeped out of each and every line. I'd quote my favourite lines back to your but they were all so good I couldn't choose. Really wonderfully crafted Mike!

  • Heheheheheheh yessss, I loved that introduction! I also loved your dark and creepy Villanelle!

  • Dharrsheena will love it. Nice take on the challenge, Mike.

  • Randy Baker2 years ago

    Delightfully creepy!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is great, Mike. Well done.

  • Hideously well done, with all five prompt words!🤣

  • Caroline Jane2 years ago

    I thought this was going to be something to do with the TV programme "The Crypt'" 😅 Great poem Mike.

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