The Chronicles of Red
She was the epitome of the colour Red
Let me spill the tea π«
On a girl named Ruby π©π»βπ¦°
She painted her life Red β£οΈ
Through everything, she did daily π§£π π
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She was a delicate Rose πΉ
When they were in Love β€οΈ
In the end, she wilted π₯
By him, never watered βοΈ
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Volcanic Lava erupted about π
That matched her explosive Anger π‘
When she found out π©
He had been cheating on her π
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Her petals caught on Fire π₯
Revenge her burning desire β€οΈβπ₯
Phlebotomy her career π
The syringe wouldn't backfire π―
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She became the Devil from Hell πΉ
She bathed in his Blood π©Έ
After she injected cyanide π
Dismembered him before he died π«
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Comments (24)
I love how you started this with that gossip energy. If it were a colour, I think it would be red. Gosh. He never watered. So she wilted. This is sad. I love how: at the point when she found out β you adorned it with the red flag. He did what? Now I am raging lava on her behalf. Phlebotomy. This was so cleverly used. Got to test what blood this devil was made of. She injected what? Damn. This poem have so many shocking elements. Wow. You didn't miss a beat or a rhythm. But still managed to kill him. Outstanding! π€β€οΈ
Oh, Ruby...maybe a bit far! π I loved the line "Her petals caught on Fire".
Wow very twisted story. Excellent poem though.
This is a satisfying piece!
Your work portrays the complexities of human emotions and the depths of her resilience and pain, amazing job, love it, thank you very much for sharing!
Ruby scares me a bit! A woman scorned is frightful. But not so sure she should have bathed in that cyanide-tainted blood!
you could have become friends with edgar allen... makes me think twice when i give blood!
Wow!! Just wow!β€οΈππΉπ²π¦πππ§§ποΈπ§£πͺπ π’βοΈπ―π₯Red!
I love the use of emoji's and how dark/ twisted this feels! Great work D!
Shocking, this! I love it, Dharr, a startling, burning piece of revenge. The violence is top notch here, your rhyme even more so. I love: "Her petals caught on Fire π₯ Revenge her burning desire β€οΈβπ₯ Phlebotomy her career π The syringe wouldn't backfire π―" but rhyming "cyanide" with "before he died" = genius. (also, ouch!)
Ooo I love the extreme juxtaposition in this and the emojis really add to it, they're perfect! And I love you the dark twist at the end that you're infamous for too.
This was incredible! Thank you for sharing it with me β€οΈ
Ah the revenge of a seemingly delicate rose. Beautiful and brutal.
This woman got to do some of the things I have always thought about doing! With your grasp of the macabre, you could easily create a series better than Twilight Zone and Tales From the Crypt!
Well this was certainly dark and twisty Dharrsheena! I like the way she handled her heartbreak! Great work! β€οΈ
Damnnnn I feel the anger! Such an explosive piece! The emojis were a good peripheral representation of each line that I didnβt think Iβd like but did! π
Wow Dharrsheena! What would I do without my morning dose of your poetry. Not a good day ahead for me so thank you!! βHer petals caught on Fire π₯ Revenge her burning desire β€οΈβπ₯ Phlebotomy her career π The syringe wouldn't backfire π―β Perfect! Volcanic Lava erupted about π βThat matched her explosive Anger π‘β Reminds me when Iβm Bipolar Raging when Iβm unwell. Lookout anyone in my path. Thank goodness Iβm in hospital by then!! I loved this!!! My insights are glitching again. So I did heart. Before I get up and make breakfast I think Iβll need to quieten my own mind. Not because of your magnificent piece. Just the stressful day I have ahead. I go back regularly and Re read anothers of mine at this time βHedges; Mind talk. Have you read it. I have made a video at the end β¦ https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/hedges%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Or I read about when I first broke free No Ross: just myself. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/no-ross-just-myself%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thank you again for making my morning!!! Pauline πΈ
Seems fair π
talented.
Fantastic!!! The descriptive imagery is wow!!!
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You have such a lovely way with words no matter the subject matter or the length of the piece. This was fabulous!!
Beautifully written with a story-like feeling to it. Very vivid visually.
I agree with Kiki. It's a pleasure to meet. someone who's not only sweet but very neat.πYou expressed in but a few short words a whole story. As the saying goes, "an unintelligent person will use complex words to describe a simple situation. An intelligent person will use simple words to describe a complex situation." Well done my friend and all the best for the future.π
Neat!