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Skeleton branches -
Displaying their nakedness,
Authentically.
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Quick note: there’s bound to be some overlap with this theme, right? i.e Rachel’s last awesome haiku. I was playing around with this one earlier in the week but still doesn’t ‘flow’ as I’d hoped.
Thanks very much for reading.
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I think it flows quite nicely! You're being featured as part of VSS Dynamic Duo starting today! Congrats!
lol this gave me a good wholesome laugh
Lovely, unique, and well-written! 💜
I like it. It’s original and has a bit of innocent fun about it.
This one made me giggle a little. I am getting that silly vibe which I like a lot. I like that the branches became a skeleton. Making them both alive and human. Goes perfectly with the image. 🤗❤️
This was fun & fab! 🧡🍂🧡🍂
I love this! A great take on the challenge
Also the song at the end is of course (fall) “At your Feet” by Crowded House- and while it has nothing to do with leaves, I couldn’t get it out of my head this week. 😅
I like the way your mind works here, Grz. Naked trees could launch a whole clothing line of being unclothed 😁 *Pay me no mind. I amuse myself nowadays* Best of luck with the challenge!
Beautiful haiku… you’re sure back with a bang!🤩
Naked trees. Imagine what the elements would do to their clothes. Ha ha. Trees are so proud of it all though. They told me so.
Really like the funny image and this is fall in late November. Good job.
Haha! I love this Grz! Those trees are so confident, maybe even more so, in the nude! I see I have a message from you! Going to look now. ✨🩷
I feel it flows very well. Loved it so much!
Very creative and great imagery
Thanks for the shout out, Grz. And I think that you and I have the same view of Autumn and what it does to trees from the haikus we're creating!