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Standing on the Moon

So real so beautiful

By Marie381Uk Published about 7 hours ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2026

Standing on the Moon

I danced on dust beneath my feet,

The silence warm, the hush complete.

A silver hush, a gentle glow.

No wind, no weight, no need to know.

The stars leaned in, they knew my name,

They shimmered soft, they played no game.

I reached my hand, and light poured through,

A calm beyond what day could do.

The craters sang in quiet tone,

I felt at once both small and known.

Each breath was slow, each moment wide.

No fear to fight, no need to hide.

A ribbon path of starlit thread

Unwound itself beneath my tread.

It led me where the comets spin,

And planets whispered, “Come begin.”

No clock, no rules, no ticking sound,

Just boundless hush, no edge, no ground.

I laughed, I leapt, I soared so far.

One fingertip brushed past a star.

And then my pillow caught my cheek.

A voice downstairs. The kettle’s squeak.

The stars had gone, the moon was too,

But in my chest, it all felt true.

fact or fictionFree VerseGratitudeinspirationalperformance poetry

About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    What a perfect dream. Good job.

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Awesome!!!!

  • Nicholas Bishop9 months ago

    I can so relate.

  • C. Rommial Butler9 months ago

    Well-wrought! Luna does seem the doorway between dream and reality.

  • Excellent image and words and the title of one of my favourite Grateful Dead songs. This is my ropey attempt https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPfOBbJMOTs

  • Imran.Bin.Ilias9 months ago

    good

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