Flinty Heels
A guide to walking away from the spindle.
To survive,
you must first
line your eyes
with seduction.
*
Hide your
shades of strength
in pants
instead of dresses.
*
Remember they lied.
[You] are not
the only one
with muscles.
*
When they say,
"Don't go out in that dress,"
do not yell.
*
Instead,
look down
at his shrunken stature
as you ruffle.
*
Teach him
that no mortal man
can reach
behind your neck
feigning control.
*
Expose the words
he stole.
Gird yourself
to farm your own land.
*
Shine your rubies
with truth
until they fill
the hearts
of your sisters.
*
Build a crystal cistern
where the water
is clear
and warm.
*
Wait for your
own face
to be mirrored back.
*
Refuse to die
on the streets
just to feed
your heart.
*
When he comes,
ensure he cannot say
you have taken
what you do not own.
*
Let him be smitten
by the compliance
he mistook
for victory.
*
Let him feel
exempted
from the truth of you
until the end.
*
Do not let
your tongue remain
a spindle hooked
behind your throat.
*
Find your calm
in words
of resonance.
*
Buckle your heels
and listen
for the flinty sound
of your departure.
*
Walk
toward yourself.
*
Watch him
from afar,
like feathers
to a hen.
A/N : While my previous exploration, "Beef of Comfort," was a feeble attempt at reaching too far when I wasn't ready, this poem is the necessary response. Today, in flinty heels, I have found the well and drawn water from it with the guidance of my very good friend, Harper Lewis. It is a set of imperative instructions on how to reclaim one's heart and walk toward the self with resonance. It is a survival guide for the muscles we were told we didn't have. If you got this far, thank you so much for reading. β€οΈπ€ππ½
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β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯β€οΈβπ₯ I bet fire flowed from your fingers as you typed this. βShine your rubies with truth until they fill the hearts of your sisters.β πππππππ Donβt you dare call it ugly crying! Itβs beautigorgeousful!!!
Yes, you are to believe in yourself no matter what is occurring in your life. Good job.
This is so beautiful, Caitlin. Elegant and pure. I don't have the words to explain how deeply this affected me, other than to say it made me cry. You're a magnificent poet. β‘οΈπBill β‘οΈ