Siren's Call
For Poppy's February Prompt Thingo

A postcard of sorts
arrived today
from a port far away
penned by my love
...
I fear my love
I will never see
thy sweetness
I will never feel
thy softness
again
As a storm rages
on the horizon
Steer clear
you could try
but sailors of old
know better to try
and steer clear
of the cry
the song of the sirens
folly surely awaits
the folly of adventure
to discover the unknown
terror and lust grow
their eyes and minds
are misty and blissed
the winds as they howl
filling hearts with fear
bring a strange calm
an alluring pull
towards the tempest
the vortex of desire
Give ear, please
to the forgotten
song of the sirens
as they sing to
the melody of
the wind chimes
They rise above
the sandcastles,
spades and buckets
at the water's edge
as they ache for
the souls of
the sailors of old
the brave and the bold
challengers of the oceans
conquerors of the seas
beckoning them
with their guile and guise
with their wanton and lust
for the stories of old
for the legends of old
to the water grave,
as they sing a gentle lullaby
"Come to thy grave,
my weary and wary traveller
Come and do not totter,
come and do not halter
Come to thy grave,
my worrisome and anxious voyager
tell me thy adventures
of the treasures, of the battles
of the storms, of the tempests
oh to hear of your bravery
and of man's ill-gotten treachery
offerings I desire of your odyssesy
offerings I covet of your stories
tell at my welcoming bosom
tell in my warm embrace
feed my desire for knowledge
feed my want for understanding
mortals you be, immortal are we
a life beyond my reach
we thirst for your lifeline
your vitality, and vigor
we thirst for that
which is unknowable, unliveable
fated are we, death wardens are we
settle yourself, rest thy head
on the lap of your desire
Come to me, at journey's end,
come, yes come to me, please
Fear not the reaper's reap,
fear not ol' Death's grip
Rest with me, let me sing
sing you a gentle lullaby
sing you a pleasing melody
let me sing you to the deepest sleep
worry not as the dense blue surrounds
fear not as the blue veil shrouds
pay no heed, give no cry
as thy nails pierce your skin
like the rocks on the rudder
as your blood taints our waters
and you become one with them
welcome an ending
more meaningful
than your start
and lay with us here
in unending rest"
*
Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: This is another entry for Poppy's second awesome prompt thingo which you can read more about below. This...happened. It grew from a straight forward poem into a poem that had a song at the end to a postcard that had a poem and a song.
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Comments (14)
This really brings home the vulnerability of life at sea I think, through our attempts to story our fate to be something more than awful.
You're doing it on purpose now 😁
Oooohhhhh NICE WORK! Loved that second half particularly.. so dark and elegant. Impressive. 😊👏
I really enjoyed it!!
I hearkened once to the siren's call. They threw me back. They wanted neither me nor my stories nor my life nor my soul.
Hahahahahhahaha omgggg Poem-ception! This was both mindblowing and mindbending! Incredibly Paulitical! 🍩🥐
This is awesome!! I love that it's a song within a postcard within a poem😂 Also glad "thingo" is back hahaha. But it's so well written!! I felt like I was reading a poetry book of a collection of super famous poems, idk how else to describe it haha. I just love the combination of dread and pre-mourned lost love.
Great poem Paul, gave me the feels!
Oh wow! It’s like you got a little bit from the POV of the Siren but also you experienced that last moment a sailor would have while being pulled into the Siren. I loved that it had horrible descriptions of dying but was still laced with nice, fluffy words, just as you’d expect them to experience. Amazing job!
Amazing!! The lullaby was so beautifully soothing, but not so gentle in outcome for 'My Love'! I loved the format too... lengths like rolling waves.
Beautiful work, Paul.
very nice, such a gift you have
Boy, Poppy and Randy Baker really have the Vocal prompt market cornered.
Nicely done!