Source: Vitor Diniz
Mother of all waves,
motherless mother,
pure tone -
music... sound.
a broadcast.
natural rhythm of the universe...
in this cycle you
birthed,
mother -
who holds you?
About the Creator
sleepy drafts
a sleepy writer named em :)
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nice
Love your free form methods.
Fantastic work!
Well-wrought! Chicken or the egg? Who created God? Who gave birth to the Mother Goddess? Questions whose absurdity may nevertheless yield revelation!
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That's long been a question I have found myself asking. But you deliver it so much better, Sleepy.
Dear Em - Although your 'Streams of Consciousness' always seems to flow in different directions than mine; I always seem to learn from your perspectives. j.bud.in.l.a.
Good question, Em. One I've been asking for a few months now. ;)
Profound and thoughtful with unresolvable ending
oooh, how brilliantly beautiful! And what a stunning final questioning line!
Oh that last line. This was so good Em. It almost felt like a lullaby. Well done!
I wish I could say "me" but my little drop feels nothing.. is nothing. An ocean is needed to cradle an ocean. Your poem adds momentum. 🥰
This does set our mind going in many directions, lots to tink about
Oh! Indeed. It is called a universe for a reason. Waves, naturally. I hear you, Em.
Motherless mother, that sure makes us think. Loved your poem!
As Finn the human would say from "Adventure Time," "Mathematical."
Yes! The perfect question to end with! Although a different tone completely, this is right up there with 'Horizons' 🤩💖
So stunning!