Remember
This is for the Vocal Time Capsule Challenge
This is for the Vocal Time Capsule Challenge, it is my third and final one even though I said I would only do one.
This is actually a haiku
Music, appropriately, is "Remember" by The Jimi Hendrix Experience
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Fallen Leaves Then Snow
Written Words Are Then Preserved
In A Time Capsule
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Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred
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Comments (11)
This was so beautiful!
What are books if not a portal to the past (if not to another world entirely?). Well done!
This was an interesting piece, love watching you push the limits and boundaries!
Very nice indeed.
Very nice Mike love it and Hendrix but the video won’t play, says not available, 😥
Well done Mike ♥️ I love music added as well.
Perfect music choice as always! LOVE this!
Amazing!!
Very nice.
I loved the appeal of your first line being longest visually and stair stepping down. I don’t know if there is a specific haiku term for that?
Awesome! Love it and the music too!