Potion
For Ellie Hoovs' Wonderland Challenge - Day 16
A flashy poster
With a headline
So bold
A clever salesman
With a claim
To be sold
Try this!
Take that!
Guaranteed
Your stomach flat
What else can it do?
Make my skin glow?
Make my hair shine?
Make my bones strong?
Make my body a shrine?
I'll take one of these
And one of those
I'll take everything
For my head to my toes
Down with the liquid
No matter the taste
Swallow now
For health make haste
But then
I open my mouth
Curl my lips to smile
My teeth fall out
I bend my knees
Flex my foot to walk
My hip screams
I lift my head
Fight my mind to live
My body hollow instead
Because
The difference
Between
A potion
And
A poison
There is
Not a one
Not one
At all
***
Ellie's Wonderland Challenge Prompt - Day 16
Author's Note: This poem was inspired by the true story of the Radium Girls, a group of young women who worked as watch dial painters in the early 1900s. Many of the girls were poisoned and died as a result of their exposure to radium, a radioactive element used in the paint, which was not thought to be hazardous at the time. Shockingly, radium was claimed to offer many health benefits and was as an additive in numerous consumer products, such as cosmetics and beverages. Following the devastating cases seen with the Radium Girls, radium was later determined to cause cancer, aplastic anemia, and other serious health conditions.
About the Creator
Alyssa Musso
A scientist by trade, but a creative at heart. One novel in progress with too many other ideas taking up space in my head. Some of those ideas end up here.
Instagram: @alyssa.n.mussowrites
My website! https://www.alyssamusso.com/
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Comments (6)
Fantastic poem, Alyssa! Love how well the before and after kind of mirrored each other! The coveted cure juxtaposed with the terrible reality! I've heard of the Radium Girls and I think you definitely did a great job with the source of inspiration!
There are no limits to the things people will do for a shortcut. Love the way you captured the essence of this so well!! Great work Alyssa!!
Fabulous! Such a great ode to snake oil salesman of old AND social commentary on the supplement and quick fix industry!
Very nice
I loved this. Great poem and loved the information on the Radium Girls.
Oooo, I absolutely love this!! Potions and poisons indeed, on many levels