Potion
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 16

They say there's no such thing as magic
but this bottle knows better:
black label, liquid amber,
sealed with promises
I keep pouring down my throat.
It helps you forget
the sound of breaking glass,
how the silence after
made your chest a haunted house.
It summons ghosts
that wear your father's cologne,
your mother's humming,
the laughter you buried in 2012.
and demons too,
the ones that wear your face
and call you a coward.
It helps you sleep
like you quit breathing,
numbs the bruises before they bloom.
It tastes like kept apologies,
goes down like smooth-edged shame,
and settles into ribs
like it's paying rent
in cracked memories.
It'll have you seeing blue and red -
begging them for clarity.
You'll call it a ritual.
Some will call it a cure.
Lie to yourself and say
"just. one. more."
They say there's no such thing as magic
but this?
Watch
as I drink...
then...
disappear.
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About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Comments (17)
great writing
Congrats on Top Story, well-deserved! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/carved-by-wanting%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Yeah - well done, Ellie 👏👏👏👏
good
Back to say congrats on the Top Story, Ellie! 🎉
Congratulations on the Top Story, Ellie! 🥳
Here’s my entry for Potion: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/potion-ar1o8k0cvu%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
witty and wise. Telling ourselves lies indeed. I brought you an entry for prompt 16. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/ink-drinker%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This one is quite cutting! Those last few lines were quite the mic drop of an ending!
Hi Ellie, here is my Day 16 challenge poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/no-lotion-just-potion-haiku%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Definitely a haunting Potion poem😳🥹. Here’s my effort: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/pour-me-a-potion%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Both dark and magical! Throughly enjoyed!
This is so emotional and powerful, Ellie. Here is mine for Potion: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/potion-izz0m0q7m%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Oo, very powerful. I like the ending very much.
Here's mine: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/potion-ub2250w7a%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
so eerie! gave me chills as I read it.
Beautiful written