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Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 16

By Ellie HoovsPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2025

They say there's no such thing as magic

but this bottle knows better:

black label, liquid amber,

sealed with promises

I keep pouring down my throat.

It helps you forget

the sound of breaking glass,

how the silence after

made your chest a haunted house.

It summons ghosts

that wear your father's cologne,

your mother's humming,

the laughter you buried in 2012.

and demons too,

the ones that wear your face

and call you a coward.

It helps you sleep

like you quit breathing,

numbs the bruises before they bloom.

It tastes like kept apologies,

goes down like smooth-edged shame,

and settles into ribs

like it's paying rent

in cracked memories.

It'll have you seeing blue and red -

begging them for clarity.

You'll call it a ritual.

Some will call it a cure.

Lie to yourself and say

"just. one. more."

They say there's no such thing as magic

but this?

Watch

as I drink...

then...

disappear.

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb

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  • Leesh lala8 months ago

    great writing

  • Diane Foster8 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story, well-deserved! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/carved-by-wanting%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • Calvin London8 months ago

    Yeah - well done, Ellie 👏👏👏👏

  • SallyJustus8 months ago

    good

  • Alyssa Musso8 months ago

    Back to say congrats on the Top Story, Ellie! 🎉

  • Susan Fourtané 8 months ago

    Congratulations on the Top Story, Ellie! 🥳

  • Susan Fourtané 8 months ago

    Here’s my entry for Potion: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/potion-ar1o8k0cvu%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • D.K. Shepard8 months ago

    This one is quite cutting! Those last few lines were quite the mic drop of an ending!

  • Jasmine Aguilar8 months ago

    Both dark and magical! Throughly enjoyed!

  • Rachel Deeming8 months ago

    Oo, very powerful. I like the ending very much.

  • T. Licht8 months ago

    so eerie! gave me chills as I read it.

  • Nikita Angel8 months ago

    Beautiful written

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