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Perfect, Like You Are

Teach me how to do it.

By Cathy holmesPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Perfect, Like You Are
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Teach me how you do that thing with a smile as big as the sky.

Kiss me quickly, lest I see deception in your eyes.

Touch me as I crumble ‘neath warm fingers and cold heart.

Soothe me with that magic balm to wash away my scars.

Take me to a place where romance exiles seeds of doubt.

Dance with me on a stage of pretense. Swing me all about.

Tell me all those honeyed words you know I long to hear.

Hold me close and whisper your sweet nothings in my ears.

Convince me that together we can ride the moon and stars.

Teach me how to be the perfect liar like you are.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    A captivating representation of the defeat we feel when all the person is capable of is deceit, so we give in, we encourage, we may even offer ways that they could do it better. So deep, current and relevant to the deep complexities of the human mind. Thoroughly impressed and even more so, moved 👏🏽 thank you for sharing your talent with us.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Sending congratulations on a much deserved honorable mention on this week's leaderboard for Most Discussed Stories with this piece.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    So sad. Powerful poem.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh my, such gorgeous words and emotion, my friend. ❤️ I wasn't expecting the ending - it packs a powerful punch!

  • Testabout a year ago

    so lovely

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Dang!! This is so good and so emotionally raw! Really well done

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! That last line, very relevant to today's culture...

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Gorgeous and terrible, and that last line is 👌👌👌

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    I like how you built us up for a happy ending, then BAM!!! Nice one, Cathy!

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    Very well written. I really felt this. Thanks for sharing. :)

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    There are some people who are so breathtakingly deceptive. I hope it’s nobody you know. This was a belter.

  • That's just who some people are. I realised that some people lie but then some people are lies. That's their whole personality. Loved your poem!

  • Testabout a year ago

    This was relatable and heartbreaking Cathy!! It made me think of that moment when you learn what's really in a person's heart and you just want to go back to ignorant bliss....

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Beautiful and devastating, Cathy. Reminds me of the song "I love how you lie" by Rihanna and Eminem.

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    Wow, that last line is something else. You are a magnificent writer!

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    Wow that hit hard Cathy. You’ve voiced my thoughts.

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    This packed a punch! Go Cathy!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Great twist and the end!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Leaving the power punch to the end. It was all looking so perfect until...

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Whoa. Love the twist at the end, Cathy!

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a year ago

    And that's the way t'is! Nice.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Aaaaaaand, BAM! Well done, my friend!

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Two lines stand out to me as some of the fears, like life, many have in any relationship: 1- Kiss me quickly, lest I see deception in your eyes. 2-Teach me how to be the perfect liar like you are. Wonderful poem

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a year ago

    Beautifully worded, with such a twisted undercurrent/conclusion...incredible work, as we've come to expect from Cathy!!

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