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My Blue Eyes

Heartbroken Haiku

By Lightning Bolt ⚡Published 3 years ago 1 min read

Broken engagement

Romantic tales left untold

Disconsolate souls

heartbreaksad poetry

About the Creator

Lightning Bolt ⚡

Bolt aka Bill, a bizarre bisexual bipolar epileptic⚡🧠 Taco Bell Futurist 🌮🔔

Top 📚s inHumor = Memes & LSD & Hell🔥Creepy Crazy Fiction⚡🩸Thrash!!🩸🔪

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Demons & Phobias & Prophets, oh my!

WiERd but not from Oz. 🤷

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Demetrious Kelley3 years ago

    😭😭😭

  • Sad but good writing!

  • I'm so sorry, Bill!

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  • Aww Bill I'm so sorry 💚

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    So sorry!!! Heartbreaking!!! Powerfully painful!!!

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Full of empathy. Good work.

  • I hate that I get this, but love that you shared it

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Sad but beautiful

  • J. S. Wade3 years ago

    Excellent! I feel the depth 🥰

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