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Mr. Asher

By K. Macfarlane

By Keith MacfarlanePublished 8 years ago 1 min read

Sunrise glows under French-grey, silk curtains

Already awake, packing mother's porcelain doll

Last open box

Tape screeches when pulled

Mother's doll brings fleeting comfort

Likely, coffee stained blonde curls fill collectors' trash cans

Pulling curtains off rods

Appraised, no value

Cigarette residue

Years smoking

French designer decorated with same opinion

Morning sun floods apartment, filling oversized wall mirrors

Everything turns white

Shadows trace cardboard boxes

One box

Curtains wrapped around arms

Folded over, resting elbows on knees

Should cry, nothing

Cool, dry air brushing against eyes

Savour dull pain

Delay blinking

Stare, white glare

Sunlight fills bedroom

Feet stampeding, mahogany stairs creak

Knock on door

Deep voice, "Mr. Asher...(clears throat) Donald Robinson, debt collector."

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Keith Macfarlane

Hi! I'm Keith. I write short poems about everyday people in everyday experiences.

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