Shhh, did you hear that? Do you think the house sounds st…
ill? Is that now a noise downstairs or are my thoughts so p…
liable to make these dangers up? Must I always feel so scared? Will I n…
ever feel I’m safe? I’m sure I heard a noise again, is it something para…
normal, houses make weird noises, right? A creaking and a s…
cutter? Will I be murdered in my bed? Tell me there is nothing, pl…
ease my frightened mind. Let me drift off into sleep and leave these fears behind.
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Comments (21)
I love what you did here, how the pauses work so well with the topic. I found myself listening This is wonderful.
I love the "texture" and relatability of this one Hannah! Very clear!
This is one of the most creative acrostics I’ve seen, Hannah. I loved it!
such a creative way for an acrostic! Hannah style all the way
This such a creative way to do this. Really well done Hannah
This is definitely the cleverest one I've seen so far! I had to read it twice!
Absolutely love it! Things going thump in the night… creepy! Or just floorboards contracting 🥹.
Dammit, Hannah. How can I even compete when you pull this out from your wonderful mind? This gets all ticks from me...distracts enough from the acrostic format while also tying into it, clever formatting gives it a very disjointed feel but as you have used words carefully sliced, they still qualify as English...and it all keeps with the theme. Just yeah, you deserve all the cake. All the back pats for this one. Truly fucking jealous right here. Well done.
I love how Pl...ease and ease works either way. Clever work, Hannah!
Omgggg, you're so brilliant! Those words have meanings whether they are together or separate! That blew my mind!
You’re such a fab and creative writer. This was brill.
How unique... as we can only expect from Hannah Moore!!!
I'm counting down the hours until this gets Top Story! Such a fun interpretation of the prompt, and so deftly done. WOW! (And if not TS, then definitely a placement!)
My goodness, this is impossibly clever. Those small sounds in the dark -- terrifying.
Oh, I loved how you split the words, as if the person is so scared they started to stutter.
Ooh great job and creepy twist!
That was really clever how you did that! Well done!
Well I’m going to have anxiety at bedtime tonight haha!
Creative and impressive!!! Thought about doing what you did!!! Bravo!!!💕❤️❤️
What a splendid and unique approach to the acrostic challenge!
Excellent!