
yes this is about you
i'm here to say
and please believe me when i tell you
i was hoping to never see this day
you might have been wondering
you might have had to guess
this is entirely about you
and so the answer is yes
this is about you
oblique and obscure
this is all about you
and this life we endure
in case you were wondering
yes i'm pointing at you
share with me this paranoia
this warped point of view
take my hand and come with me
for i too have things i wish to show
all that you hide from yourself
and then deny that you know
we all have issues
problems and such
but you have to rise above
and not use them as a crutch
not use them as excuses
and then get all upset
not fly off the handle
when expectations are not met
but like you i'm just a human
and i too have tasted the blue
simply do unto me
as you'd have me do unto you
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
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Comments (1)
You continue to push the boundaries of elegance and poignance.