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it might be,

By BrenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

yes this is about you

i'm here to say

and please believe me when i tell you

i was hoping to never see this day

you might have been wondering

you might have had to guess

this is entirely about you

and so the answer is yes

this is about you

oblique and obscure

this is all about you

and this life we endure

in case you were wondering

yes i'm pointing at you

share with me this paranoia

this warped point of view

take my hand and come with me

for i too have things i wish to show

all that you hide from yourself

and then deny that you know

we all have issues

problems and such

but you have to rise above

and not use them as a crutch

not use them as excuses

and then get all upset

not fly off the handle

when expectations are not met

but like you i'm just a human

and i too have tasted the blue

simply do unto me

as you'd have me do unto you

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About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Jacob Sherman3 years ago

    You continue to push the boundaries of elegance and poignance.

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