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Too much is not enough

By BrenPublished 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read

i fuckin

enjoyed it

i thought

it was

the grouse

it got me

on multiple levels

and up

and out of the house

i fuckin

enjoyed it

and fuck

me dead

if i'm lying

if i swore

anymore

and then told you

what for

you'd think i was

just

fuckin trying!

i fuckin

enjoyed it

immensely

what more

do you

need me

to say?

is it some wired

zany deal

where none

of this is real

and what

does

a date

mean

anyway

i fuckin

enjoyed it

enjoyed it

so fuckin much

i lost all

i could feel

see smell

hear and touch

i deadset

fuckin

enjoyed it

and i'd

do it

all again

and that

is the gods

honest truth

await

and witness my child

this bounty

this seasonal proof

i fuckin

enjoyed it

it was

the

ducks

fuckin

nuts

and now i need

to rhyme

that verse

in a way

that

doesn't

much

sucks

performance poetrysocial commentarysurreal poetryslam poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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