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Wonderland Challenge Day 5

By Ellie HoovsPublished 9 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read

It wasn’t iron,

nor brass,

nor skeleton-jawed steel

that turned forgotten rusted locks.

It was stardust,

forged by time,

tempered in the hush

between heartbeat and breath.

You held it

like a secret,

tender as lichen

growing between the cracks

of ancient tree bark.

No lock clicked,

no bolt gave way,

but something within me

unfolded.

A garden I forgot I planted

bloomed where shame once rooted.

A conservatory I’d bricked shut

opened into sky.

You didn’t ask what was inside.

You didn’t need to.

You were the key-

the treasure manifested

neither in jewels, nor gold.

Rather

it shimmered in pools of un-spilled tears,

it sparkled with the faceted edges of laughter,

it gleamed in truths too sacred

for sound.

And still,

you turned softly in my soul

and let the light back in.

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Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

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  • Diane Foster8 months ago

    My entry for Day 5 https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/i-am-what-the-lock-remembers%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • Alyssa Musso9 months ago

    So beautiful, Ellie! The imagery is absolutely lovely. I am going out of order, but here is mine! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/key-diq690f16%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • I can’t say it any better than D.K. 😃. I love the positive conclusion too.💖

  • D.K. Shepard9 months ago

    Your poetry is a fantasy lover's delight! Such beautiful and enchanting imagery!

  • Susan Fourtané 9 months ago

    I love this one. I love the idea of a stardust key.

  • L.I.E9 months ago

    I really like this one. Love how powerful it is and it contains so much emotions.

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