Key
Wonderland Challenge Day 5

It wasn’t iron,
nor brass,
nor skeleton-jawed steel
that turned forgotten rusted locks.
It was stardust,
forged by time,
tempered in the hush
between heartbeat and breath.
You held it
like a secret,
tender as lichen
growing between the cracks
of ancient tree bark.
No lock clicked,
no bolt gave way,
but something within me
unfolded.
A garden I forgot I planted
bloomed where shame once rooted.
A conservatory I’d bricked shut
opened into sky.
You didn’t ask what was inside.
You didn’t need to.
You were the key-
the treasure manifested
neither in jewels, nor gold.
Rather
it shimmered in pools of un-spilled tears,
it sparkled with the faceted edges of laughter,
it gleamed in truths too sacred
for sound.
And still,
you turned softly in my soul
and let the light back in.
Participant's Poems:
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb
Comments (11)
My entry for Day 5 https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/i-am-what-the-lock-remembers%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
So beautiful, Ellie! The imagery is absolutely lovely. I am going out of order, but here is mine! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/key-diq690f16%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Ta da! My keys poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/grab-the-keys%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 😵💫
I can’t say it any better than D.K. 😃. I love the positive conclusion too.💖
Your poetry is a fantasy lover's delight! Such beautiful and enchanting imagery!
Here's mine for this day: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/key-wv1zvw0zzj%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hi Ellie, here is my contribution for today's challenge: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-key-to-my-heart-is-always-yours%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here is my entry for Key: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/key-x2eb80f9y%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I love this one. I love the idea of a stardust key.
Here is mines: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-time-key-1kiyh00d8%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I really like this one. Love how powerful it is and it contains so much emotions.