His Broken Smile
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His Baggy clothes
And Jewelry
Never could hide
His broken smile...
He thinks of halting, and then his belief
Matures to connotations.
He encountered the world while in a Bubble...
Living the Life with no goals,
You'll find yourself going in circles.
Around like a merry-go-round...
Young men don't pretend to not see
The discipline that you need.
His Baggy Clothes
And his Jewelry
Could never hide
His broken smile...
He said, “I Just wanted to let you know that we are not allowed to dwindle”.
“I thought I had figured
It out,
But The love is perishing...
I can't fake it at this juncture...
My love,
Why do you go shattering my heart...
Crusades Break down my partitions.
You push through Knowledge out of the way to disclosures...
I retain Pebble emotions that you
Can only display.
He Speaks and initiates the conversation with a Smile...
He tries to love...
And Hold dear...
He tries to Dote on...
But glorification
Was sidelined
By the Bruises in Life...
His Baggy clothes
And Jewelry
Never could hide
His broken smile...
He wear his Baggy pants
To pelt affection...
Or maybe boost his dignity!
Although his Baggy Clothes
And Jewelry
Never could hide
His Broken smile....
He lives in voluptuous Pride!
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Comments (20)
The baggy pants, I hate it when my jeans are hanging down. it is interesting to hear a different perspective
This had so much depth to it and emotion. Wow, just wow :)
What powerful emotionally strong piece
Amazing piece! I teared up a bit
I love the way you put what you observe about others into such beautiful rhythm and words. 🥹 As always, your passion is captivating ❤️
Wonderful words
Awesome piece 💗🕊️
You write with a passion that is unequaled on Vocal.
Your poems always make me so emotional! Very beautifully written!
All the ways we mask & try to hide ourselves, whether with false bravado or urban camouflage, trying to blend into the background. Until someone sees. And it makes all the difference. As one who sees, Lonzo, you really do make all the difference.
Beautiful. I loved the image for this. That was creative thinking at its best.
Nice! You have a unique voice.
Really like this. The way you use repetition is masterful.
Wonderful piece. Well done, as always.
Love the title , when something broken, you can either shatter or forged it stronger so it won’t break again. Very deep poem. Merry go round , it keep on breaking and trying to fix it the wrong way.
sweet!
Nice work! I loved the use of repetition in this piece. 💖
And another beautiful piece. Wonderful Lonzo!
Beautiful, Lonzo! 💫
Knocked down, but never out. So resilient despite the bruises on the body and the breaks in the heart. Well done!