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When Absence Became a Presence

A quiet hymn to absence, stillness, and the terrifying beauty of empty space

By Rosalina JanePublished about 5 hours ago 1 min read


Emptiness and space are as important as thought.....

Absence makes the heart grow fonder. We need space!

Nothing is on the ascendant.....


An empty house, a quiet street,

Where no birds flew and the wind failed to greet

The clocks did pause, its ticks unsure

The world held its breath, the stillness queer.



Shadows stayed, a touch too long

Visions looming by eye's edge

Its soul empty, bareness strong

Its cold breath cuts, a razor's blade.


It's quite surges, wraps and swallows

A chair, now gone, a lamp now blown

Its hunger triumphs, a new gallow

Nothing ascends its blackened throne.



When the day was finally done

Blackness stayed, the light now gone

Nothing's soul had triumphed - won

A well-deserved, though unseen throne.

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Rosalina Jane

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