It was Middle School ✏️
Writing This Letter of My Confessed Love 📝 ❤️...
Dear, Middle School Crush 😍📝
I stole a Kiss from you😘
That afternoon...
I wanted to hold the moment, but it was gone excessively soon...
We lived youthfully,
Recreating frolics
And preserving secrets...
They declare when a Boy likes you,
he picks up on you...
Well, I guess it's valid, and I have
to tell you...
I stole a kiss from you...
With it,
Came a breeze🌬️
From coconut palm trees 🌴
And a memory to forever grasp...
You barrage my mind
with narratives
Untold...
I fantasized and you came closer...
The day we stood
Alone in
Detention,
It wasn't a Mistake!
I embezzled the kiss from you that day...
Sincerely, HLTP❤️
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (17)
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The was the cutest, and I thought you were shy 😉You were Bold and Handsome in this poetry. I really enjoyed this 🥰😘
Aww 🥰 worth having detention I’m sure.
This is really cute 🥰!
no, it wasn't a mistake...great letter Lonzo
cute!
Awww, this was so cute and sweet! You always capture my heart with poems like this!
Somehow, I almost missed this one. I loved this line: 'I embezzled the kiss from you that day...' That's Golden! You sir are a certified genius of love! 💝
Loved this Lonzo. You told a wonderful story in so few words.
Aww... Beautiful!
Fantastic, Lonzo, and oh so relatable 💕😊
This is cute! Well written.
Sweet & innocent. A lovely thought or memory. One question, Lonzo. The rest of the time when referring to the stolen kiss you use the past tense. But in the second to last line you use the present, "embezzle". Was this by intent or a typo? I might think that you intend to imply that you continue to embezzle the kiss in your thoughts & memories, but your final phrase, "that day," feels like it works against it.
This is so sweet. Well done, my friend
This brought me back to being young and having that special crush 🥹❤️ Wonderfully done, my friend! ❤️
I loved this!!
Oh Louii, u so bad,