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Glass Half-Full

Or Half-Empty, a poem

By Abby JacobsenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Glass Half-Full
Photo by Margarita Zueva on Unsplash

Filling the glass is a lesson in futility.

I pour from the bottle, I drink from the glass,

and neither stays very full or very empty for long.

Yet I continue to fill the glass and drain it.

Fill the glass and drain it.

Fill the glass and drain it.

Neither stays very full

or very empty for long.

I fill the glass and drain it.

I sit and am still.

Except for the steady

drain and fill.

Drain and fill.

A lesson in futility.

I watch a wall,

the paint bubbles.

I pour from the bottle,

I drink from the glass.

I drain the glass and fill it.

Even though it never stays

very full or very empty

for long.

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Abby Jacobsen

An Oregon based artist, reader, and writer.

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  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Your writing was so effortless, my takeaway was so many metaphors. Good job!

  • I love that you use alliteration to build rhythm and that the half full/half empty part of it comes to a nice full on smack on the cheek to wake up at the end. This was very well done

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Very nicely done.

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