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Follow the Leader

A Poem on Being a Thoughtful Follower

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Follow the Leader
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We celebrate the quintessential leader—not one of our political go-tos, but the Pied Piper of the German town of Hamelin. As everyone well knows, he combated Hamelin's rat problem in 1284 by leading them to the Weser River, where they drowned. 

Don't mistake me, I laud the Piper for dealing with the infestation. I dislike rats as much as the next person. But the Pied Piper does teach the important lesson of being a thoughtful follower-we don't want to go down the wrong path as they did. 

Enjoy this simple narrative poem. 

Artist with a heady hat,

Plays the flute to round up rats,

He with tremulous music leads,

With sweet notes the rats he feeds,

They hear his tune without their ears,

Their ratty heads fogged, unclear,

To his dulcet tune they sway

The music leads down path astray. 

inspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oh wow, I'm not familiar with that at all! That's fascinating. Loved your poem

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    Great poem! I’ve always loved this story!

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