Photo by Sander Weeteling on Unsplash
Flitter, flutter down
Autumn leaves like winter snow
Gently to the ground.
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Till next time,
Calvin
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Calvin London
I write fiction, non-fiction and poetry about all things weird and wonderful, past and present. Life is full of different things to spark your imagination. All you have to do is embrace it - join me on my journey.
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Cute Haikuβ¦ Autumnβs βwinter snowβ is the colour of snow that I wanted to eat as a child!π³
I don't know if I am weird or what but. I get this small child vibe. Maybe it's the photo. When I was reading it, it sounded like it was being recited to a child. For them to follow how to say the lines and it was just the most β it gives me a happy feeling β it's a rare feeling. Feeling of fun and being able to sit in that carefree glow. I read it again just to make sure and I felt it again. You didn't just give us words, you gave us a feeling. It's so tangible, I want to burst out in both laughter and cheer. Thank you Calvin, for appealing to my inner child. Outstanding workππΎπ€β€οΈ
So beautiful, you have special way with words ππππ
Nicely done!
I love how you compared autumn leaves to winter snow. Beautiful Haiku!
I love the rhyming! That photo is wonderful!
Such a lovely image, autumn leaves falling like snow.