attraction is but a
zealous lodestone,
bound by inherent laws
akin to gravity…
the day we met,
i felt that pull—
me into you
us, into a mix of
veering emotion…
no one can really define
the process of
entanglement—
igniting fusion
like a newborn star
blazing across
heavenly horizons
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH4 days ago in Critique
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The process of entanglement is a gorgeous phrase.
This is so intense!
Oh wow this gave me tingles! Absolutely love your word choices for this.
Mmmmmm… my kind of sapiosexual verse.
🌅✨ "It seems that this is now a life partner..." All thoughts, all silences, all dreams— You have contacted you these days. ☕ Morning surprises for everyone. Those who are truly in love, become closer every day… 💖
This is freaking awesome, Lamar!! Loved every damn word :) Bravo, my friend!!
What an out of this world take on the challenge. Really liked it
Ohhh this was stunning to read aloud 🤍🙏🏻 I already felt lit up… and then I saw the 22 comments and 22 ❤️’s 😇 That number always appears to me where magic is alive and love is vibrating
Beautifully written! Congrats on the leaderboard mention!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I love the use of metaphor/ simile in this poem, Lamar!! So elegantly written! Congrats on honourable mention this week!!
Fabulous love poem!!! Congratulations on the Leaderboard Honorable Mentions!!!
This was great! I like the comparison of attraction to gravity, it's something inevitable that we can't really fight. Expertly done with this one good sir!
Sheesh! This amazing. Those first four lines knocked it out of the park, into outer space even. Loved this!
That's amazing. What a beautiuful piece. Well done.
Oh, this is divine, Lamar! Love the theme of attraction entwined with the cosmos 😍
Beautifully put in so few words, Lamar.
Whoaaaa, this was breathtaking! So magnitudely written!
"akin to gravity"... Yes, like falling... Super nice piece, Lamar. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Great title too. ⭐
Oh this is very very good! I love every line a lot, but especially, "no one can really define the process of entanglement" It's just wedged between the stunning imagery so perfectly!
Well-wrought! It certainly seems like a chemical reaction when it happens, and the results are just as diverse, for better or worse!
The picture is awesome, and a beautiful story. Well done!!
🔥You flame-broiled this one Lamar! So Passionate & Eloquent! Loved it! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✨
First off that picture is awesome. And then everything after, is just a work of beauty
Beautiful imagery! Such tightly, well written lines