Elemental
Quadru Haiku : Four Worlds Collide
Fortunes sting ointment
Mountains recourse know thyself
Hospitable air
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Flavours enterprise
Try me now water trumpet
Salient greeting
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Trident marks earth same
Steps like giant columns stand
Futures tip the point
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Hearth and stone better
Ambrosia letters form plan
Tea cups cradle wish
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Canuck Scriber Lisa Lachapelle
Vocal Top Story 13 times + Awesome Story 2X. Author of Award Winning Novel Small Tales and Visits to Heaven XI Edition + books of poems, etc. Also in lit journal, anthology, magazine + award winning entries.
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That was very beautifully written!
Wow, beautiful work!
very nice read, 😃
Lisa, your haiku quartet was very much a reflection to me and refreshing as much as cool water is to a parched throat. I enjoyed it, very much
Very epic. Well done 👍
Gorgeous quadru haiku 🥰❤️
Beautiful piece. Well done.
Wonderful!!! Loving it!!!💕💖😊
Wow, this was so beautiful! Brilliant use of imageries!
Almost classical mythology, love this
I love the air of mystery. Very well written
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This is beautifully worded with wonderful imagery 😍😍 I really love you style. Your words have a sophistication to them. Lovely and dreamy!
I loved how this painted such a vivid picture! Very nice use of the 4 haikus :)
Oh this is nice ❤️💯🎯
This is awesome Lisa. I especially love the last line ‘tea cups cradle wish’