I love the deep blue
You need me and I need you
World I can’t breathe through.
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Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶4 days ago in Petlife
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Nice words
Superb!!!
This is so lovely. I adore the connection you made wth the ocean.
I love how it expresses our dependence upon the ocean.
Beautiful piece.
The deep blue of water is so majestic. You captured this so well :)