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Dancing in the rain

A sensory poem

By The Invisible WriterPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
Dancing in the rain
Photo by Neal E. Johnson on Unsplash

Rain wet on our skin

Music drifting in the air

My eyes lost in yours

Citrus mixed with vanilla

Apple martini on your lips

love poemsFree Verse

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The Invisible Writer

Life goals - vacation always- work never

Creator of unreadable stories

Writer of bad poetry

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Flawless! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    I loved this! What a perfectly described moment.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Sounds like a peak moment.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Stunning. This was such strong work.

  • Oh wow, that felt so blissful. Loved your poem!

  • L.C. Schรคferabout a year ago

    This one feels like an image in sharp focus for me!

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a year ago

    This is lovely - so concise but so rich with life. Awesome work! :)

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    So amor!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is beautiful, and so romantic. Well done.

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