Tell me
She says quietly
Peace is written in the notes of citrus
Laced with vanilla in her hair
A Dove flies in the sky above us
A steak of white across a canvas of blue
Her hand grips my coat, and I hold on
For dear life, because she's already
Made me fall
~
Music from a guitar and a smoky voice
Play softly in the air around us
A light breeze blows loose a strand
Of brown streaked with blonde
A car horn breaks the tension
Building in our electric air
My fingers reach up, and
She whisper’s the words
As I tuck the strand behind her ear
~
The rest of the World dips and falls away
The sounds of the city bustling by us disappear
Her breath rests warm against my neck
Goosebumps rise on my arms
And I know
This is the moment
Where I became hers
~
The first time her blue eyes saw mine
The way she smiled that day at the park
The soft feel of her lips
The touch of her hands
The sound of her voice singing
To my heart with every word
She’s ever said, dance
Inside of me
~
Behind her shoulder, the moon climbs
Up into the changing dusk sky
"Tell me", she says quietly
People pass all around, unaware
Of their witness to
My confession
~
Somewhere miles to the east
The ocean is coming in with the tide
In waves that crash and break against
The shore covering the grains of sand
The same way her love has
Crashed and covered
Every part of me
~
She looks up with a glow
Shining on her skin
Her lips turn up in a smile
Blue eyes capture brown
The stars twinkle above
A million spotlights
To highlight the words
~
Our lips are almost touching
When I decide
She doesn't have to wait
Any more, and I tell her
What my heart already
Knows
"I love you"
About the Creator
The Invisible Writer
Life goals - vacation always- work never
Creator of unreadable stories
Writer of bad poetry


Comments (14)
Wonderful poem
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Beautiful work!
The build up to the kiss really is chef's.......
Oh, what an exciting love story! So much in one poem 😍
Fabulous images, so beautiful.
Gorgeous romantic piece! I love this Invisible! I adore how many sensory details you used. Excellent descriptive piece!
This was so beautiful Will, well penned!!! Great work!
So beautifully romantic. Well done.
damn! that is a beautiful and sincere love poem! one of the best I've read! Stunning, Will!
This is so Romantic. Deserve Top Story!!!!!👏🏽👏🏽🥳
sublimely romantic, i feel faintly wooed just by reading it
Awww, this was like soooo sweet! Such a lovely poem!
A wonderful love poem. And have a look at your 4th line again. I think there's a typo. It stands out in terms of the tone of the rest of the piece.