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Collecting Raindrops

Sky-ku

By Cathy holmesPublished about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
Collecting Raindrops
Photo by Mary Schultz on Unsplash

Collecting raindrops.

My reminder from grey skies,

it's okay to cry.

HaikuheartbreakMental Healthsad poetrySenryu

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    This is Soo Beautiful & touching that it almost brought tears to my eyes! πŸ₯ΉExcellent work Cathy!

  • Chloe Gilholyabout a year ago

    I'm happy it's okay to cry. I've done it a lot these past few years.

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    Beautiful in every way! And the image is perfection. Fantastic work, my friend!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Damn. Brilliant.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Wonderful✨

  • L.C. SchΓ€ferabout a year ago

    That picture is so perfect for this. You could've gone with a rainy shot, or a storm, something dramatic or artistic... but it would have been so cliche. The lonely red bucket packed such a punch.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Heartbreaking, relatable and so elegantly penned Cathy!! I love a good rainfall (and cry, when it's needed)!!!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Oh. This was so sad and optimistic all at once. Love this a lot.

  • It's always okay to cry. Screw those to who otherwise. Your Haiku was so deep and beautiful!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Poignantly penned, my friend!!!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Aw, this is so beautifully done and we all need a good cry every now and then =' )

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    What a great title and haiku! Love the blend of imagery with that powerful punch of emotion

  • Such a beautiful sky-ku! πŸ’™πŸ©΅

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    This made me do a big heaving sigh! Lovely.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    I'll be looking for the Top Story here. Beautiful piece, my friend!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Beautiful, meaningful and surprisingly liberating, Cathy. Another excellent entry to the challenge!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Such an emotionally packed haiku! Well done.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Ah, that last line is so emotional

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    Yup, it so is. Well done Cathy!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    It sure is. Nice haiku, Cathy

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Ah, hugs to you, my dear friend. This was so touching, and yet sad and cathartic at the same time.

  • Judey Kalchik about a year ago

    Grief continues and reminds you at random moments. πŸ’–

  • Sweet sentiment

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Sure is okay to cry. Beautiful work, Cathy!

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