Tell me you're at peace,
to gaze upon me, through a
billion sparkling eyes.
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
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Hey Cathy!!! I'm back to say congrats on third place for most popular story!!
Wow! Such a cool perspective! Best of luck, Cathy. Definitely a contender!
an amazing writer, great work of written
😍🥰🥰
This is gonna win 🏅
Amazing
Gorgeous!
A very touching piece, my friend! Love it!
What a beautiful emotion expressed so eloquently 🥰
So heartfelt with touches of both grief and hope! Fantastic, Cathy!
How perfectly lovely! I know I keep saying it but this one is DEFINITELY my favourite.
Gorgeous and so sentimental, my friend!
Camaraderie with the universe. Wonderful.
Oh I especially loved how you referred to the stars in your third line!
Omg, stunning ❤️
Fabulous haiku!
Lovely sentiment, Cathy. I hope so.
You did it again, Cathy. Beautiful.
❤️ The night sky is perhaps the perfect picture of peace. Lovely.
That was sparkling, and loved the analogy!!!
Oh that's gorgeous.
Such a soulful haiku, really brought me some peace! Loved it Cathy!!
Wonderful imagery!
Oh, this is stunning.
Oh, this is beautiful!