Someone I have not seen post in awhile is Babs,
Reason for thinking is today is first pick for the Mavs.
The Dallas Mavericks are likely going to pick Cooper Flagg,
I wonder about Babs thoughts on this snag.
I miss her commenting on posts,
And her writing is something anybody could boast.
Come back Babs, because Vocal is calling,
We miss our presence, it feels like we are falling.
Give us some of your unique writing,
Weigh in on the offseason or the baseball season sighting.
Calling out to Babs in hope she is okay,
We want her to show her face today.
About the Creator
Sid Aaron Hirji
Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH5 days ago in Critique
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I've only been introduced to Babs in recent months, but I noticed she hasn't been around much. I miss her too!
A very compassionate creation that reveals a sensitive soul. :)
I'm glad she's back now 😁
I see that Babs replied....so glad that she is ok. Hope it all works out your way. Hi Sid. Enjoy your game.
Being away for a bit myself, now i am missing a few creators. Hoping Babs is ok. Love your plea to her, sure hope she replies Sid, baseball is another language to me...cannot help...🤣
I love how you turned this into a poem! I hope Babs reads this and returns or at least sends some smoke signals your way.
aww idk who babs is I'm fairly new but hope she's okay! your writing is so wholesome. lmk what you think of my newest piece plz
Sid, your poem is fantastic and love it too! I am doing okay. How about you? ❤️❤️❤️
I miss Babs too. But I know she's okay because she's been posting on Facebook. Would you like me to send your poem to her?
I was thinking about Babs too Hope She is coming back soon great poem and a calling !