Autumnal ็งใฎ
For The Vocal "Falling Leaves" Challenge
By Mike Singleton ๐ Mikeydred Published 4 months ago โข 1 min read
"Avebury Autumn" By Angie Livingstone
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Green To Brown To Gold
See The Leaves Falling Into
A Golden Carpet
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Comments (9)
Lovely haiku, love the music as well.
I absolutely love the border of this haiku. I like how you payed attention to the stages the leaves chose to reveal their colours. A golden carpet, is always good to walk on when I go to the great outdoors. I love this! ๐คโค๏ธ
I could see it! Well done, Mike.
A lovely haiku! ๐
I love how you show the life of the leaf in a single line with โGreen To Brown To Goldโ. Itโs almost like theyโre swirling through the stages of their lives right before our very eyes. Nicely done.
Lovely ๐
Well done, Mikeydred!
A perfect visualization of the season. (Just a note: I published a few haikus for this challenge on my own. I wonder if you could give me your opinion on them if you want.)
Beautifully written ๐ผโฆ๏ธ๐ผ