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24 Hours

A haiku about an average day

By Clyde E. DawkinsPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
24 Hours
Photo by Agê Barros on Unsplash

Twenty-four hours

Eight for work and eight for sleep

And eight to have fun

inspirationalperformance poetrysurreal poetry

About the Creator

Clyde E. Dawkins

I'm a big sports fan, especially hockey, and I've been a fan of villainesses since I was eight! My favorite shows are The Simpsons and Family Guy, etc.

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  • L.I.E12 months ago

    Yes indeed 💯

  • Dean F. Hardy3 years ago

    Straight to the point.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Creative; great job!

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    I have no idea why I am not subscribed to you yet, Clyde. I've rectified that now, though. This was a fun take on the challenge. Loved it!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Oh, I loved this idea!! Very creative! If only, those 8 hours of fun had a little more fun in them, lol. Great work!

  • KJ Aartila3 years ago

    In an ideal world, maybe - the world seems to have trouble with the concept of "fun." Nice job!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Nicely done

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Love it

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Sweet & superb!!!💖💕

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Sounds like a balanced day to me so long as my eight hours of fun is not eaten up by the commute 😆

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