Nanna's Warning
A Spooky Micro

There was only one rule: don’t open the door. That was easy. The red inverted triangles drawn on its peeling black paint frightened Layla, though Nanna called it a protection spell.
Scary, yet it'd never been more than a simple door in the hallway - until the day it whispered:
"Help me."
Had Layla been older, perhaps she'd have dismissed the voice as a trick, but she was ten and innocent.
"Who said that?"
A stronger, impossibly familiar voice replied. "It's me, baby."
Frowning, Layla cautiously approached. "Mommy?"
"Yes! Oh, I've missed you!"
She stepped closer. "I thought you went to heaven, Mommy?"
"No, silly, I'm right here! Open the door and see!"
Hesitantly, Layla reached out, then remembered the rule. "I'll get Nanna. She's in the garden."
"Let's go together, baby. Please? Mommy's lonely."
Pity overwhelmed her caution. The door clicked softly as it swung outward, revealing an impenetrable, nearly tangible darkness.
"M-Mommy?"
The air turned hot and foul, like rotting meat. Layla stumbled backward, but a skeletal arm shot out of the dark and snatched her wrist. Its skin had fallen away, but bits of grey tissue and muscle clung loosely to its bones.
A deep, gravelly voice, not at all like her Mommy's, chuckled in the darkness and began to pull. "Naughty little girls should heed their grandmothers."
Layla dug in her heels, screaming, but was pulled inexorably forward, toward whatever waited inside.
An icy wind crashed into her side, throwing her painfully to the floor but breaking the creature's iron grip. The door slammed shut against an agonized howl of frustration, and the hallway was silent again.
Then Nanna was there, bending over her granddaughter with an outstretched hand covered in frost. "Reckless child. Didn't I tell you? Never, ever open that door."
About the Creator
Kenny Penn
Thanks for reading! I enjoy writing in various genres, my favorites being horror/thriller and dark/epic fantasies. I'll also occasionally drop a poem or two.
More at: www.kennypenn.com
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Comments (19)
Great! Congratulations!
Congrats, Kenny! This was a great entry.
Amazing work! I enjoy your writing style. Congratulations! 🏆
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Oh my... this was such a fabulous entry Kenny!! I loved this!! Congrats on Honourable mention for the challenge!!
Geez Kenny, a little Stephen King in you after all! Dude! 😆
Extremely creepy. Good Job.
I LOVE IT! More please 😁
Oh my! Pretty creepy! Great job Kenny!
She's not going to forget that!
So nightmarish!! That’s one shifty Nanna! Great work, Kenny!
well written, you filled with talent👌
Very creepy! Great micro, Kenny!
Great work! As always your gift for description shines through.
This is fantastic. I especially love the ending. Well done.
Oh that is just spooky!
Looks like Nanna has been keeping secrets. This was so creepy!
Ok, I will avoid hands and closets consciously now! A great take, Kenny.
This is excellent, especially because the grandmotherly rescue seems plausible, and rather moving, in context. Nice work!