W.T.F.
28th August, Story #241/366
I was happy asleep. Still ok when I woke, before I opened my eyes.
You've overslept before. You know how you know, the moment you wake, you're late.
It's like that. Except it isn't just the light. It's the fabric I'm balled up under. Its feel. Its smell. The... presence behind me.
I freeze another moment, as if this would pass. I open my eyes. It doesn't help. The window's not in the right place, and the light pouring in is wrong.
I'd not been drinking or anything.
I twist round, and almost scream, clamping a hand over my mouth. Who the fuck is that?! He snorts and shifts. I scramble away from him as quietly as possible.
I slip out of bed, pull on a robe from the back of the door and creep out. Onto the landing. Since when do I have a landing?? I trip on some toys. Oh noooo...
It's too spacious. There are stairs. Worse: a gallery of family photos lines them, and I'm in the pictures! I recognise the man from the bed, but the small boys are strangers.
They're in the lounge. Picking their noses. Watching cartoons. They've abandoned half-eaten bowls of cereal on the expensive-looking sofa.
At the kitchen table, I run my fingers over my scalp like gardening tools, pushing them deep into my hair.
What the fuck.
"Muuuum," comes a shout. "Can we-"
I want to snap, "I'm not your mum!" but I swallow it.
He comes into the kitchen. I stare. His Spider-man pyjamas are grubby with coco pops and spilt milk.
Then he... stops. His face looks weird, because he was just about to form a word. It's like someone pressed Pause.
I waggle my hand in front of his face. Partly to check if he reacts, but also to see if I can in fact still waggle it. That's when I catch sight of the suited gentlemen with white hair and a trimmed beard, watching me.
"There appears to have been a mix-up, Ms Welch."
I goggle at him.
"You appear to have developed the ability to take other people's memories," he continues. "Quite alarming, I imagine. We can help you put it right. But first, I want to discuss this with you an Opportunity. Your newfound ability could be very helpful to law enforcement."
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Author's Note:
Word count: 366
(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and authors note.)
Submitted on Wednesday 28th August at 23:59
Edited for formatting and to fix links.
A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This one continues my 241 day streak since 1st January.
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The story behind the story: this is an idea I had for the Epic Beginnings Challenge. I'll try to edit this one and submit a more streamlined version to the challenge.
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Comments (18)
W.T.F why could I not stop reading? I demand answers. But all playfulness aside this was really good, my eyes were moving so fast across the screen to figure out what was going on. I saw absolutely none of what you wrote coming, and that was so exciting.
Back to say 'congratulations' for the Honorable Mention win on this week's leaderboard for Most Discussed Stories - you are most deserving, to be sure!
Well-wrought! I couldn't help but think of that Talking Heads song... "You might find yourself..." Haha.
Wow! Chalk up another vote for a follow up!
This is an awesome beginning! There are so many cool places you could go with this! I'm excited to see what's next!
ooooo! I like this origin story very much!!! So clever!!
Oh this was so clever. Really loved the ending. You writing a follow up?
I’m really lookin this story, like being in a warp zone, intriguing and beyond 😊😊
This ability can drive one insane. Consider the noise, the murderers who never dream of evil. Still useful though for so much.
How did he know?
Oooo, this is veryyyyy intriguing. I'm not sure if I'd wanna have that power though, lol
nicely done! it really draws the reader in!
Really great idea An approach I wish I would have thought of
I don't believe that would be the person I'd want to take over if I had that power. Nice twist, L.C.
This could have been an entry into the superhero challenge, LC.
I love this! I laughed so much, thinking of her walk of shame, then I realized what was happening. You could turn this into an Epic hero thingy. Would be great.
This is another grabber, LC! Loved it! Hope I never live it!
What a brilliant twist....so full of possibilities.