Unhinged
Thursday 3rd October, Story #277/366

"When it starts," Phil said (thick, freckled fists clenched) "You join in. Got it?"
Riley, a scrap of a boy next to his mountainous classmate, gulped and nodded. It was hard to believe they were both fifteen. Phil sloped to the back of the line.
Whispers had been circulating that something was going to happen in Ms. Garnett's woodworking class. Exactly what was unclear.
She appeared in the doorway in her leather apron, hands on hips, a determined set to her face. She was a tiny woman, but tough. Many of her classes were all boys, and oversubscribed. She ruled them with an iron fist. Her flashing green eyes tolerated no nonsense. Her red hair had been escaping from her bun all day as if it were a live thing, Medusa's snakes uncoiling in a ginger halo of stress.
Ms. Garnett let them pass into the room singly, or in pairs, only when they were neat and orderly. Several gave an appreciative sniff. It smelled the way all woodworking classes do: mostly of woodshavings, a hint of oil and glue and hot metal.
"This is practical time you're wasting," she said when the noise level rose. "I don't want to see a lot of wandering about and chatting. Stay at your workstations!"
Near the end of the lesson, Phil nudged his bench partner, Jay, who nodded at Ruben and winked at Ollie.
Jay asked Ms. Garnett for help. Handsome and charming, teachers rarely refused him.
Ruben yelped and clutched his hand to his chest. The teaching assistant went pale. A hapless, accident-prone boy, she was ready to believe he had a real injury. She escorted him to Medical.
Ollie scrambled up the shelving at the back of the room and knocked the camera askew. Ms. Garnett turned to shout at Ollie, and Phil gave her an almighty shove. Every adolescent hand dipped into the box of wicked looking metal files.
It went on along time. Human bodies are pulpy and squashy, but also resilient.
The handmade wooden sign above her desk that said WELCOME TO MS. GARNETT'S CLASS was spattered with red.
The boys didn't wait for the bell. Riley let the stained and slippery file clatter to the floor, then he ran, too.
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Word count: 366
(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and author's note.)
Submitted on Thursday 3rd October at 23:05
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Comments (14)
What a fantastic gripping tale! ‘Every adolescent hand dipped into the box of wicked looking metal files. It went on along time. Human bodies are pulpy and squashy, but also resilient.’ Well Mrs Garnett was a little grumpy! Loved it! Have subscribed l. And wow a year of stories! I’ll be back!!! Pauline 🌸
Them some bad kids. Files thats a rough way to go
As a teacher, I feel attacked😂😂 Unhinged indeed!
Well that's both a teachers worst fear and classic mutiny.... 😳
I'm so lost 😅 If you don't mind, may I know what happened? 😅😅
Wow...that was dark but so well written....leaves me wondering just exactly what happened....
Wait. What just happened? Damn, i guess they really hated that teacher.
Oh no. This doesn’t sound like a happy ending. This was darkly brilliant.
Woah…this makes me wonder what Ms. Garnett might have done to trigger this desire in some of the students or if they’re just rotten enough to do it and then the rest of them followed along. Well written, but it does make me curious and want even more.
I am left in awe, just wonder…wtf??? Don’t mistake me! This is good! I just have whiplash hahaha
Sounds more like reform school than regular freshman HS. Is this why they eliminated shop class?
OooooKay. What just happened? I think I better go to the principal's office ... or something.
Whoa. Please don't assign this class to me! I like the characterisation of Mrs. Garnett, and the boys...all too familiar. Reminds me of the first class I taught in a secondary school here, save the metal files!
For being tough on students??? Yikes