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Then Who?

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By L.C. SchäferPublished about a year ago 2 min read
Then Who?
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"His eyes blazed," sounded like such a cliché, but they did! He was so angry, the gold flecks in his hazel irises looked like sparks. The spittle flying from his bristling beard, and his aggressive gestures only added to the effect. He looked like he was about to explode.

"I'm telling you," Karl's shouts were punctuated by steps forward, "I didn't do any of that stuff!"

Sandy took a pace back, and another, corresponding to his. Like a reluctant dance.

She was cross with herself for giving ground, but he was much bigger, and in his fury, seemed to tower over her.

Her heart kicked up a notch, a flighty hummingbird thrumming in her chest. Her anger had shrunk, abandoning her when she most needed it, crowded out by Doubt, and leaving room for Fear. Karl's outrage seemed genuine. She believed him, yet it felt wrong, weak, to bend when he was being so aggressive.

She dashed tears away before they could spill, drew herself up taller. She felt tiny, still, like an angry kitten.

Well if you didn't do it, who did?

I don't know! Maybe Wyatt. You've ruined that kid. He's a spoilt little shit.

Sandy's eyes went wide, and her jaw dropped.

"He's a child, Karl!" she seethed, her anger rising again in a wave to meet his. "You seriously think he would leave a KNIFE by Matty's bed?"

"You think I would?"

No, she realised. Of course not.

They were both panting, the waves receding.

The question was stamped on his face, and reflected in her watery eyes.

Then who?

Karl pulled her into a hug, enfolding her under his beard so she wouldn't see the tears in his own eyes.

"It'll be okay," he muttered, his voice gruff. "We'll get him to a psychiatrist. It'll be okay."

She would have stiffened again, pulled away, indignant over the insult to her eldest son. Energy had left her, though. She sagged against his chest. Shaking her head, wiping her face across his t-shirt, she confessed, "Wyatt doesn't have the imagination to do this..."

Karl was thoughtful. "Why don't you just video it?"

"I tried. Last night. The camera got tipped over somehow."

"Let's try again tonight."

She sniffed.

"Okay."

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  • Stephanie Hoogstadabout a year ago

    For me, Karl’s anger has been the scariest part of this so far. I’m glad to see him calm down, at least, and come together with Sandy instead of remaining indignantly mad at her. I love the mystery of who done it here, too, though I’m still pretty sure it was Jingles himself.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Camera got tipped over? Not suspicious at all… another great installment!

  • I'm waiting for this to become a movie now haha, well done LC!

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    OK, I've gotta' quit going through this backwards. lol

  • Rebecca Pattonabout a year ago

    Apparently, this wasn't a one-shot and there were other chapters before this...I gotta read those! This was good! You portrayed the uncertainty and fear of the characters very well.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    I'd say this.....dangerous to have kids! Well executed as usual, LC.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    This is an incredible journey into a classic horror piece. Hollywood would love this!

  • Like finallyyyyyy she confronted Karl about it!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Okie dokie....this is moving full steam ahead. Can't wait to see what unfolds.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Well now. This is getting more interesting by the chapter. I still think it's possessed though..

  • Scott A. Geseabout a year ago

    Elves scare me almost as much as clowns and the old dolls my wife has sitting so innocently on the bed in our spare bedroom. Each night I make sure the door is closed tight. Nice writing.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    I hope it’s her doing all this crazy stuff! Great story L.C.

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    As always exceptional writing L.C.!!!

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    I don't buy the elf excuse. It's Wyatt!

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    Brilliant I got my elf’s out today but blessed them with holy water lol

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    As someone about to bring their elf back into rotation - thanks for all the nightmares. Some very tense stories

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    The Elf on the Shelf strikes again! It seems. This was full of emotion and quite a lot of tension. Well done, LC!

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