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The Garden That Forgot to Bloom

A metaphorical journey through silence, struggle, and self-discovery.

By Muhammad Abuzar Badshah Published 6 months ago 3 min read

There was once a garden where no flower ever bloomed.

It lay between two quiet hills, wrapped in the arms of a forgotten valley. The earth was not dead, and the sun did not hide. Rain visited kindly, and the wind whispered lullabies across its skin. Yet, no color ever rose from the ground. Only leaves. Only stems. Only green—and nothing else.

The villagers called it the Hollow Garden.

Many believed it was cursed. Some blamed the seeds. Others whispered that the soil was jealous of the bright meadows blooming beyond the hills. But whatever the reason, the garden remained mute in its silence. Year after year. Season after season.

Then one day, a girl arrived. Her name was Lila. She was not from the village, and nobody knew why she came.

Her eyes looked like they had once held entire storms. Her hands were small, but they carried the quiet weight of something she never spoke about. When she first walked into the Hollow Garden, she did not dig, she did not plant, and she did not water.

She sat.

Right in the center of the garden, among the stems and silent soil, she simply sat.

And she listened.

Not with her ears, but with her silence. She listened with her breath, with her stillness, with her open palms resting softly against the earth. It was as though she was listening not for sound, but for feeling.

The villagers watched from afar. Some laughed. Some shook their heads. Some whispered that she must be broken too, just like the garden.

But Lila kept coming back.

She did not speak. She did not try to change the garden. But over time, she began to hum.

Softly. Gently. The kind of humming that sounded like a lullaby only the soul could hear. Her voice was cracked, like a dried riverbed after a cruel summer, but it carried warmth. A warmth that filled the empty space without asking anything in return.

Days passed. Then weeks.

The garden remained green. Only green.

But something had shifted.

The wind began to circle the valley more often. It carried her hums like invisible threads through the leaves. Birds started to visit again, resting on bent branches. Even the rain lingered longer, as if curious to watch.

Then one morning, Lila brought a basket.

It was not filled with seeds or tools, but with paintbrushes. Dozens of them, and pots of paint in every color the eye could imagine.

She sat in the garden and began to paint the leaves.

Red, blue, yellow, orange—petal colors blooming on plain green leaves. The garden, surprisingly, allowed it. It let her color its silence without resistance. By evening, it looked as though the valley had finally bloomed.

“It is only paint,” the villagers said.

But still, they came.

One by one. Some brought food. Some brought stories. Others brought songs. The garden became a place not of flowers, but of people. They laughed. They wept. They sat. They listened.

And then, something unexpected happened.

A single flower bloomed.

A pale yellow daisy, hidden near a rock. So quiet and soft, it could have been mistaken for memory. Nobody noticed it the first day. Or the second. But on the third, a small boy pointed and shouted, “Look! It is real!”

Lila smiled.

Not because a flower had finally bloomed, but because someone had finally seen it.

By the end of the season, ten more had bloomed. Quietly. Naturally. Not because of magic, or perfect soil, or any special method.

But because something inside the garden had healed.

Lila never said goodbye. One morning, she simply left—with the same silence with which she had arrived.

The villagers kept visiting the garden. They stopped calling it Hollow.

They gave it a new name.

The Listening Garden.

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Muhammad Abuzar Badshah

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