Sports Bra
A Story Every Day in 2024 September 2nd 246/366
I should have brought my sports bra. This one is not going to support me at all. Why didn't I put it in? Too much in a rush, that's why. I shouldn't have stayed up to finish that series. I knew I'd regret it one way or another. I've got nothing to watch tonight now either. And these yoga pants? I look like a bag of rubbish tied up. I thought they were meant to allow movement? Where's my water bottle? Oh, don't tell me I left it in the car? I'm such a bozo! And now I'll be late!
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Exactly 100 words
A Drabble for today based on the prompt "Write a few paragraphs about the thoughts going through your head as you change into your gym clothes."
This was taken from:
I chose to format it in one long paragraph as if it was stream of consciousness.
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Back to say congratulations on making this week's leaderboard for one of the most discussed stories. Well done!
Very well relatable.....Why didn't I put it in? Too much in a rush, that's why.
Very relatable, love how it was written as a stream of consciousness, it was enjoyable to read the difficulties of the sports bra providing no support and becoming forgetful due to being in a rush. It was a perfect choas and I like a bit of that.
Never heard of drabble b4, new word for the day. very interesting though. I shall be drabbling. Congrats on your L/board win.
Superb slice of life at the gym and great drabble. Congratulations on your win and Leader Board.
Congratulations
This was funny and oddly relatable for me Rachel!! Congrats on Second place honourable mention!! 😁
Hey, hey, hey....big congratulations for winning the second place spot with this piece on this week's leaderboard for the Most Discussed Stories of the Week. You are most deserving!
Humorously written and loved it!! Congratulations on the Leaderboard win!!!❤️❤️💕
So true tho, its surprising how restrictive yoga pants can be, and sports bras vary widely!!
Having the wrong bra for physical activity is no joke
A window into an ordinary life, rendered extraordinary by the narrator's wit and self-deprecating candor!
Haha! You’re the best Rachel! I feel like this is me every time I force myself to go to the gym or take a class!
Awkward brilliance, Rachel! You make going to the gym worse than it already is!
Rd ~ So you're going to leave us "Hanging," Then..! Jb
Brilliant stream of consciousness, Rachel!
I love this inner monologue!
Interesting. Mine would be much more anxiety based. Do I feel up to this? Have I got time? What comes after?
Honest and convincing. Brilliant monologue, Rachel!
Relatable, relatable—did I say relatable?
This feels like a peek inside my head today. I stayed up all night binging that Netflix series with Sheridan Smith about insider trading, and I'm not wearing a bra either.
Yup, like Paul said, it's like a journal entry. Well done.
Drabbles look fun… great job.
Lol. This feels like a real journal entry or something. Well done, bozochum! :P
Oooo, a bozo, that's a new word for me. Loved your drabble!