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On A Train

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By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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To be sat in a warm seat, ideally with someone close, watching the countryside glide by and the train takes you to your destination.

See the trees and the rivers pass you by and you look through the window, protected from the wind and rain. You could almost fall asleep, rocked by the hypnotic rhythm of the train running on the metal tracks, as it does every day.

See the clouds rolling above the hills, moving with the train, as the driver makes sure you will be safe and make your destination.

This is somewhere that you feel you could stay forever. but you have a place you want to be, so you take a small nap and allow yourself to dream, how perfect everything can be.

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  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    If only time permits us to watch the world go by! Thoughtful, Mike.

  • I don't think I can fall asleep on the train will all that noise but it does seem wonderful. Loved this!

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    Such a calm, contentment, and soothing reflection! Let me hop on the train!!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Loved your short tale and could be lulled to sleep on a train. We live where trains are available but not used by many, like big cities. Going in a train adventure soon in Switzerland!💓

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    May I get I to that train. Come on!

  • A delightful tale of a train ride. I loved ABBA & that album cover photo in particular!💖👍🏼✅😃

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Love the ABBA music, believe it or not, and a train ride sounds so good. Great job.

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    I felt I was on that train it brought back happy childhood memories

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