Oh! Oh! Ah! Ah!
Vocal Community Microfiction Series - Filthy
Aisha and Kyle thought they could get away from old Grammy without incident, but then Grammy turned to little Noah and asked, "do you want a puppy?"
Noah, who had been playing with Grammy's puppies, jumped up and squealed, "Mom, can we? Please?"
"We'll think about it..."
"They can play with the monkeys!"
"Monkeys?" Aisha glanced at Kyle who shrugged, confused. "Sweetie, we don't have any monkeys."
Noah stomped his foot. "Yes we do!" he cried. "They're in your room and they sound like Daddy!"
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Noah got a puppy that Christmas.
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Lol. Good one.
😂😂😂 Annnnd time for some soundproofing inside their room, or maybe the kid can move to the basement. Great read Loryne.
Okay, Loryne, that made me laugh out loud. I don't know who gave you the average "Reader insight" of "Nice work", but I'm gonna have to see if I can't bump that up a notch.
Lol, freaking hilarious! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Hahahaha that’s how you get what you want as a kid! Just by having a good hearing! That was hilarious.
Have a banana? Love this! 😀 🍌
Haha! 😅😅 This is great; awesome job! 🤗
🤣🤣🤣 Out of the mouths of little kids!
Sounds like Daddy😮💬🤣
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HAAAAAA! HAHAHAHAHA! OH MY GOSH! THAT'S HILARIOUS! Phew! Ah, lowkey, as a little kid whenever I would walk in on my parents and my mom had the blankets pulled to her collar bone cause she was shirtless underneath I always thought we were going to have another sibling. Back to the story, now I wonder if Aisha and Kyle made an investment into duct tape or something similar along the lines. Badum Tish!
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