Love in the Shadows
Oh Jeff flash fiction challenge
"Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but... I need color in the shadows, definition!"
"Definition: You are not my main. Main is acceptance; the entree, not dessert. Your shadows prevent color. Love eliminates shadows. Goodbye."
Holly smirked. "Ha! I made him break it off. Now he's the bad one."
🔚 49 words.
Copyright © 12/20/2024 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Comments (11)
Nicely done! It was a pleasure to read such a brief, clever one!
Hilariously clever & oh so brief 🤣✅.
Well played, Holly.
Nicely done Andrea. Hannah is right in that no one comes out well here. Holly is conniving and Jeff has a touch of temper. Lol. This conversation is realistic. Very well done. 👍😀
No one comes out well here!
Love this, Andrea. She won with shadowy moves!
Hahahahaha this was creative, Andrea!! Love your entry! 🤣💌
Hahahahahahahha loved this take on the challenge!
I hate it when people play games with love. Good for Holly, though. This was great, Andi!
Short, sharp, and dripping with clever irony! Holly’s twist at the end is gold—what a mic-drop moment. You've nailed the art of shadowy love games!✨
This is beyond outta the box thinking funny Well done