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Free as a Bird

For L.C. Schäfer's One Dollar Challenge - Quote Me Baby (Espresso Edition)

By Caroline CravenPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Top Story - November 2024
Free as a Bird
Photo by Julian Zwengel on Unsplash

Of course she’s learned to fly. I’d have expected nothing less. Not from the woman who’d clasp my face between her hands and say: “Don’t tell me the sky’s the limit when there are footprints on the moon. You’ve got to believe in yourself Cale. I know I do.”

And I’d laugh and thank my lucky stars she was mine. The only woman to make my weary heart soar and now she’s even further out of reach.

“Cale?”

My eyes snap open and I peep through my lashes. She lounges in the chair, arms draped over the side, wicked green eyes sparkling. A slow, lazy smile dances across her face. Her auburn hair might be flecked with gray, but she’s as beautiful today as she ever was.

“You were miles away.”

“No, I’m right here,” I say. “Where I’ll always be.”

She nods and reaches across the table, her hand brushing against mine: “So how is everything?”

I snatch my hand back and collapse in the chair. What a ridiculous question. She knows damn well what my life is like. How the days bleed into one, forcing me to accept that tomorrow will be just the same as today. Everything?

“Same old, same old,” I say, shrugging my shoulders.

“You are eating, aren’t you?” she asks, pinching my cheek. “I’m worried. You look thin. Is that cough still bothering you? Did you talk to the doctor?”

I bat her hand away and drop my gaze. I don’t want her to see the tears pricking my eyes. I can’t afford to show any sign of weakness. Not even to her.

“So, flying?”

“Oh Cale, I love it,” she chuckles. “I didn’t think I’d ever get the hang of it. My instructor said flying a helicopter is like patting your head and rubbing your stomach at the same time.”

She throws her head back and roars, her husky laugh exposing her weakness for Gauloises. Back when we’d first met, she’d place a cigarette between her lips and a dozen men would spring to their feet, vying to be the one to light it for her.

I squeeze my eyes shut, trying to remember the last time I saw her so happy. Were we ever this happy? Our lives couldn’t be more different. We’re literally worlds apart.

“I love swooping through the sky, bursting through clouds. I feel as free as a bird.”

Free.

“So, what’s next? Are you going to take up flying professionally?”

“Just the one job. That’s all.”

She startles when the alarm wails, picking up her coat, and looping her bag across her shoulder. As she leaves the room, she calls out: “Look up at the sky Cale and think of me.”

I shuffle along the corridor into the yard. My heart heavy. I didn’t even tell her I loved her. The sun dips below the horizon, the sky blazing orange. I hear it first. The thumping of rotator blades, the helicopter swooping left and right, a rope ladder trailing behind.

“Cale, hurry.”

I sprint along the prison walls, the guards yelling, sirens screeching. I jump for the ladder hauling myself up. Her hand clasps mine and I feel the energy crackle between us. She was like a shot of espresso, a spark bringing me back to life.

The prison shrinks into the distance, and I whisper in my wife's ear: “You’re the best my darling. I love you to the moon and back.”

NOTE:

Okay doke, so this is inspired by a story I read in the news. A mob boss – don’t remember his name - was sent to jail for armed robbery (and other things, he was a bad lad). Rather than pining at home, his wife Nadine (I certainly remember her name) took lessons and learned to fly a helicopter. She flew the chopper above the prison and busted her husband out of the slammer. They were on the run for several weeks before they were caught (unfortunately). Nadine is definitely a shot of espresso, the ultimate ride or die. I think everyone deserves a Nadine in their life and from this day forward if people can’t commit to learning how to fly and breaking me out of jail, then I’m not interested! Thanks for reading and to L.C. Schäfer for setting this challenge.

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Caroline Craven

Scribbler. Dreamer. World class procrastinator.

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  • Call Me Les11 months ago

    Sorry I missed this earlier! What a ride this was. So true. May we all find our Nadine!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    I'd definitely ride a chopper for you! Love this 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Hahaha, what a great fun story. I love the strong women!! Congrats on top story and your Leaderboard this week!!

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Nadine is my new hero lol. Loved the story and the way I was surprised and literally said hey wait a minute in my head when I read the end. You are so talented Caroline.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    This was explosively good, Caroline!! Such a gripping read! Can’t believe it’s based on a true story!?! Loved every bit of it!

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Stopping back to say congratulation Caroline!

  • Susan Fourtané about a year ago

    Wow! What an ending. She certainly had determination. And congratulations on the top story!

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Congrats on TS!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    I really enjoyed your story. I remember the actual event of the helicopter flying wife rescuing her "charming prince"...at least for a while. Well done story!

  • Scott A. Geseabout a year ago

    Caroline Nice writing. I love unexpected endings.

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    We all need a Nadine! This was great, Caroline!

  • Rachel Steinmetzabout a year ago

    So beautiful! Congrats on TS!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Great take on the challenge! Fantastic and electric story.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Yay!!!!!!!!!! Caroline!!!!!! See!!!! the!!! Exclamation marks. You get the point. Congrats on an awesome Top Story!

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    This is awesome, Caroline. I want a Nadine in my life too. I had no clue how it was going to end and how impressive it was! Great short story.

  • OMG I love this story! Did not see that coming at all. He might be a bad lad but a bit gutted to hear they got busted in the end 💜c

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Great story and an even better ending. Well Done Caroline.

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenlerabout a year ago

    Soooo well done, Caroline, as usual, because you are one of my favorite writers!!! Are you sure Nadine is not your middle name???

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    This is great, Caroline. Or should I call you Nadine?

  • Excellent tale & great ending ✅

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Most triumphant! Didn't see it coming, and felt the lift when it did.

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    This is a poignant and bittersweet reflection on love and distance. The final moments with the helicopters recuse, was a cinematic quality! You always nail your stories! Incredibly done, Caroline! 💌

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    I enjoyed the way you blindsided me with the ending. I thought they were rescue firefighters or something similar. Great story, Caroline!

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