Monday 12 October, 7.30pm
434 Bakersfield Avenue
"911, what's your emergency?"
"It's...it's my husband...I think he's going to..."
"Is he there with you now?"
"Yes...I..."
"Hello?"
End of call.
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Thursday 15 October, 9.30pm
434 Bakersfield Avenue
"911, what's your emergency?"
"My husband..."
"Ma'am, what has happened?"
"Nothing...but, I'm afraid."
"Afraid of what, ma'am? Your husband?"
"Yes...but, I need to go...sorry."
"Are you in danger?"
End of call.
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Monday 19 October, 9am
432 Bakersfield Avenue
"911, what's your emergency?"
"It's my neighbor...oh my god…I…I think she's dead."
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (10)
Omg, that is so horrifying! I feel like the operators failed here!!
Omggg! Does this actually happen? Don't the 911 people send someone over to have a look when the call is ended just like that?
ooooh wow. Well done, Paul.
This is all too realistic unfortunately… but it’s a phenomenal story. Great stuff.
If only...what more is there to say?!?
Unnerving. Unsettling for everyone involved.
This was heartbreaking and a sad reality to so many abuse victims. You captured this tragedy perfectly. Ugh, fin.
Fabulous, very effective!!!
Hardhitting 😞 Very well done 👏
Good work, well done.