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By Paul StewartPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Fiction?
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Monday 12 October, 7.30pm

434 Bakersfield Avenue

"911, what's your emergency?"

"It's...it's my husband...I think he's going to..."

"Is he there with you now?"

"Yes...I..."

"Hello?"

End of call.

-

Thursday 15 October, 9.30pm

434 Bakersfield Avenue

"911, what's your emergency?"

"My husband..."

"Ma'am, what has happened?"

"Nothing...but, I'm afraid."

"Afraid of what, ma'am? Your husband?"

"Yes...but, I need to go...sorry."

"Are you in danger?"

End of call.

-

Monday 19 October, 9am

432 Bakersfield Avenue

"911, what's your emergency?"

"It's my neighbor...oh my god…I…I think she's dead."

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!

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  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    Omg, that is so horrifying! I feel like the operators failed here!!

  • Omggg! Does this actually happen? Don't the 911 people send someone over to have a look when the call is ended just like that?

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    ooooh wow. Well done, Paul.

  • Caroline Craven3 years ago

    This is all too realistic unfortunately… but it’s a phenomenal story. Great stuff.

  • Linda Rivenbark3 years ago

    If only...what more is there to say?!?

  • Unnerving. Unsettling for everyone involved.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    This was heartbreaking and a sad reality to so many abuse victims. You captured this tragedy perfectly. Ugh, fin.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fabulous, very effective!!!

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    Hardhitting 😞 Very well done 👏

  • Ruth Stewart3 years ago

    Good work, well done.

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