162 Man of Her Dreams
For Monday, June 10, Day 162 of the 2024 Story-a-Day Challenge
He was everything she wanted--handsome, sexy, witty, kind, and considerate. He put her first in everything. He was a generous lover.
Although there hadn't been an official ceremony, in her mind they were a happily married couple.
In hard times, their love was so strong that they managed through. It was an all-in partnership, a "tenants-by-entirety" relationship. It perservered and kept them afloat--financially and emotionally.
One morning, however, she awoke, cross with him. She was terse and cold. He searched for what might have happened to so distance them but was clueless. He searched for anything he might have done.
"I'm sorry," she finally said. "I just had a bad night. A terrible dream."
"Would you like to talk about it?" he asked.
"I don't know. What do mental health experts say? Ignore it? Discuss it?"
"Well," he replied, "I think any introspective explorations, especially about things that are troubling, only help."
"Sure...sure, I see that," she agreed. "You were in my dream," she began. "You left me for another woman. A woman with children."
"Right there!" he laughed. "That's not me."
"Right," she agreed.
"Was she hot, though?" he joked. She shoved him playfully.
Hot? she asked herself. Yes, she was! This was the outrage by which she fell asleep that night. Next morning, she was more than cross; she was personally hostile.
"You didn't kiss me good morning, love," he complained.
"That's right."
"Uh-oh," he said. "What'd you dream about me this time? What'd I do?" She wouldn't respond.
Morning after morning she became more belligerent.
"We should go see someone," he finally suggested.
"With you? I don't think so. Now you're beating me every night. You lock me in closets. You've assaulted me!"
"Wow," he sighed. Then, in exasperation, "They're dreams! Put this into perspective, my love. It's not me. We need counseling. Y'know, like the mental health experts say."
"No!" she said. "We're not salvageable! I don't want you. I deserve better. I'm pretty and young, still."
"But I love you. You won't find someone who loves you more!"
"Oh, but I can. I will. It's easy. I dreamt you up, didn't I? I can just as easily dream up someone else."
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AUTHOR'S NOTES:
For Monday, June 10, Day 162 of the Story-a-Day Challenge
366 WORDS (without A/N)
Title-accompaniment photo was AI-generated (Artificial Insomnia), but the somnambulation was not.
ABOUT THIS STORY:
The closer we achieve, in a partner, someone like ourselves, the less likely it will work out.
This is a truncated version (to meet the 366 word limit of the Challenge) of the story of the same name I submitted to the 3:00 AM Challenge currently ongoing, at https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/man-of-her-dreams%3C/strong%3E%3C/a%3E%3Cstrong class="css-1mrz9mz-Bold">.
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Gerard DiLeo
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Comments (4)
Oh that twist!
Oh wow, I didn't think that he was a figment of her dreams as well. Loved this!
Really great twist, and your ABOUT line is spot-on!
Well done on your story.