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Twin

1800s fiction short story

By JessicaPublished 11 months ago 4 min read

In a small, dimly lit cottage on the outskirts of a village, Eleanor lived a life of quiet hardship. The crumbling walls, the creaking roof, and the thin curtains that barely kept the chill of the winter winds at bay were constant reminders of the poverty that clung to her family. She had two children, little Martha and young Thomas, who often went to bed hungry, their tummies aching for food they could not afford. And her husband, Thomas Sr., a man of few words, worked from dawn until dusk, laboring in the fields for a meager wage that barely covered their basic needs.

One afternoon, as Eleanor trudged through the market with Martha and Thomas in tow, a commotion broke out near the town square. Curious, she followed the sound of voices, her heart skipping a beat when she saw the royal carriage, the golden horseshoes gleaming in the sun. The Queen, resplendent in velvet and pearls, stepped out, accompanied by her entourage.

But something caught Eleanor’s eye — the Queen's face. It was a reflection of her own, down to the shape of the nose and the curve of the jaw. It was like staring into a mirror. Eleanor’s breath caught in her throat, and as if drawn by an invisible force, she made her way through the crowd.

The Queen’s eyes locked with hers, a flicker of recognition in her gaze. The royal lady’s hand reached out, gently grasping Eleanor’s arm, and with a soft smile, she whispered, “You look like me... Have you always been this poor, or is this some cruel twist of fate?”

Eleanor, startled, could only nod. She had never spoken to a royal before, much less one who looked so eerily like her.

“I have an idea,” the Queen said suddenly, her voice low but intense. “Why don’t we switch places for a week? I will experience your world, and you will experience mine. No one will know, of course. We’ll both learn something about what the other endures.”

Eleanor’s mind raced, her heart thundering in her chest. The idea was mad, but it was also a chance to live outside her suffocating world, even if only for a few days. She glanced at her children, who were wide-eyed, their faces filled with wonder. She thought of Thomas Sr., who worked tirelessly to provide for them, but his efforts never seemed enough. Could a week in the Queen’s life change everything?

Before she could stop herself, Eleanor agreed.

That evening, as the exchange was set in motion, Eleanor was draped in the Queen’s silks, her hands adorned with rings too heavy for her simple fingers. She couldn’t help but marvel at the finery, but the weight of it made her feel like an imposter. The Queen, in turn, was dressed in Eleanor’s simple clothes, her face free of makeup, her hair pulled into a practical bun. She looked... human. Ordinary. Vulnerable.

The first days were surreal. Eleanor, now in the palace, was waited on by servants, served lavish meals, and roamed through halls that echoed with history. Yet, it wasn’t all glamour. She felt the eyes of the court on her, their whispers about the new "queen" who seemed so unlike her predecessor. She realized that royalty was not simply about wealth and fine clothes — it was about expectation, isolation, and the constant pressure to perform.

Meanwhile, the Queen, in Eleanor’s shoes, quickly learned what it meant to scrape by. She saw how exhausting the daily grind was. The fields were backbreaking, and though she did her best to help, her hands quickly grew sore. She was welcomed by the village but also eyed with suspicion. Her days were filled with long hours of labor and little rest. She could no longer hide behind layers of luxury; she had to confront the very human reality of poverty.

As the week drew to a close, Eleanor and the Queen met once more. There were no grand speeches, no fanfare. Just two women, exhausted in different ways, who had glimpsed each other's lives and found them both burdensome in their own right.

“I see now,” the Queen said softly, “that wealth and power do not shield one from suffering. You are strong in ways I cannot even imagine. I wish I could change things for you, for all of you.”

Eleanor nodded, a tear escaping down her cheek. “And I see now that your life, though so different, carries its own burdens. No one is truly free.”

The Queen smiled, the first real smile Eleanor had seen from her all week. “Then let us promise, as women, as mothers, that we will do what we can to make the world a little less cruel for those who follow.”

And with that, the two women, sisters in spirit if not in blood, returned to their own lives — one to the throne, the other to the cottage. Neither would forget the lessons learned from their brief but profound exchange.

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Jessica

My Blog is about family, and lifestyle... as well as short stories, and poems.

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