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"Echoes of the Forgotten"
A Journey Through Lost Memories and Hidden Truths The rain had just begun when Elira stepped into her grandmother’s attic for the first time in years. Dust swirled in the air, lit by the pale light seeping through the cracked windowpanes. She was here for closure. After her grandmother's funeral, Elira returned to the house she hadn't visited since childhood, hoping to find something—anything—that would explain the strange dreams that had haunted her for weeks.
By Kaleem Ullah8 months ago in Critique
Don't know?
I sent an email to Justin at Creatd and in that email I asked, 'What I did to do to be not allowed to comment.' I am not sure how long I will not be able to comment on stories, articles and poems. I am leaving 'Insights' on everything I read and likes. I know I mentioned only a few times the new site I work for, but that was just to share my good news with everyone. I really like writing and reading here on Vocal. I am still waiting to hear about this. I Will let you know.
By Mark Graham8 months ago in Critique
Shakira
I am logged in and reading my notifications and when I went to read another story there was a notification by a SHAKIRA who seems to be just starting here signing in this current month and has 45 articles published already. I think Vocal should hire someone to review new 'applicants'. Here is an idea that just might work. The online writing site that I wrote for a long time ago had a short application to fill out and for the owners to check out before letting anyone write there. For right now I think Vocal only has writers sign in with a username and password. Please share what you think.
By Mark Graham8 months ago in Critique
When businesses read and subscribe
What do you do when you sign in and check how you did, and you notice in your notifications that there are businesses subscribed to you. I have a few and some even have been on since 2023 that even have a few articles posted. To be honest there were a few that did have some interesting articles, and I even left a comment sometimes. I no longer subscribe to them now though and skip right passed them on the list of notifications. Am I doing the right thing. I have deleted or reported when they left comments. Please comment.
By Mark Graham8 months ago in Critique
Could Jayson Gaddis or The Relationship School Face a Lawsuit? A Public Review of Legal Concerns. Content Warning.
Introduction: Where There’s Silence, There May Be Risk Jayson Gaddis, founder of The Relationship School, has built a brand around emotional mastery, self-awareness, and transformation. His programs promise students the tools to become certified relationship coaches and deepen their relational intelligence.
By Kevin8 months ago in Critique
The Relationship School by Jayson Gaddis: Red Flags, Overpricing, and Entrapment into High-Cost Coaching Programs. Content Warning.
Introduction: Growth or Entrapment? A Closer Look at The Relationship School The Relationship School, led by Jayson Gaddis, promotes itself as a cutting-edge institution for emotional mastery and relationship coaching. Its two primary offerings—Relationship Mastery and the Relationship Coach Training Program—are marketed as premium, life-altering experiences.
By Kevin8 months ago in Critique
The Relationship School by Jayson Gaddis Is Not Regulated, Not Accredited, and Not Professionally Recognized. Content Warning.
Introduction: A School in Name Only The Relationship School, created by Jayson Gaddis, presents itself as a transformational coaching program that trains people to become “certified relationship coaches.” However, despite the branding and emotional appeal, the program is not a school in any official, legal, or academic sense.
By Kevin8 months ago in Critique
The Relationship School by Jayson Gaddis Is Not Regulated, Not Accredited, and Not a Legally Recognized Institution. Content Warning.
Introduction: A “School” Without Authority The Relationship School, founded by Jayson Gaddis, claims to offer life-changing education in emotional intelligence and relationship coaching. Its programs are marketed as professional, certified, and transformational.
By Kevin8 months ago in Critique
What did I do wrong?
I do not know what I did wrong. I was reading and commenting on stories this morning, and now I signed in again and was going to comment, and there was a note saying 'you are unable to comment on this post due to a violation of the guidelines. Now, I admit I mentioned my new employment site, but the person wanted to know why I haven't been on Vocal for a while. I only did that maybe two times. So, it looks like I will not be a commentor for a while. Still able to read and write.
By Mark Graham8 months ago in Critique
Special Ops Season 2 Release Date
Special Ops is a show that no one disliked, meaning it got a lot of love from the audience. The first season was a super-duper hit. After that, Special Ops 1.5: The Himmat Story came into the limelight. It was a huge hit. And now we have been waiting for Season 2 of Special Ops for a long time.
By Ayush Verma8 months ago in Critique
Is Gram Chikitsalay as Good as Panchayat? "Honest Review"
Look, content king TVF has again brought another piece of content on Amazon Prime Video. If you don't know about TVF, then "Kota Factory," "Aspirants," "Gullak," "Panchayat," "Yeh Meri Family," "TVF Tripling," "Pitchers," and "Cubicles." Oh my God, TVF people have created amazing content after amazing content.
By Ayush Verma8 months ago in Critique
War in Paradise
Kashmir – A Heaven or a Hell on Earth? Since childhood, we’ve heard Kashmir being referred to as a piece of heaven on Earth. Perhaps that’s why Mughal Emperor Jahangir once visited Kashmir and exclaimed, "If there is paradise on Earth, it is this, it is this, it is this." Standing before such breathtaking beauty, one cannot deny his words. However, the question remains—can a place where its inhabitants regularly face oppression, murder, rape, abduction, and arson truly be called a paradise? Rather, it seems more appropriate to describe it as a piece of hell within heaven.
By Mubasshir Haque 8 months ago in Critique